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请大家帮我翻译一下，谢谢了，编辑说我有语病
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中文： 采用某流程生产的XX钢出现裂纹，通过金相显微镜、扫描电镜能谱分析等手段对裂纹进行分析。结果表明，XXX是导致裂纹产生的主要原因。通过优化连铸工艺参数，使裂纹得到有效控制，产品质量得到提升。 我的翻译： Cracks were found in the gear steel of XXXX produced by xxx route , and they were analyzed by metallurgical microscope and SEM/EDS. The results show that thexxxxx were the main cause of cracking. The cracks have been controlled effectively and the product quality has improved by optimizing continuous casting process parameters. 谢谢了啊  |
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主要是最后一句话有问题： The cracks have been controlled effectively and the product quality has BEEN improved by optimizing continuous casting process parameters. |
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前面没有致命错误，改的目的也是让整体上更好些而已。 The cracks, found in the gear steel of XXXX produced by xxx route, were analyzed by metallurgical microscope and SEM/EDS, and the results show that thexxxxx were the main causeS (对应于前面的复数were) of cracking. The cracks have been controlled effectively and the product quality has been improved by optimizing continuous casting process parameters. |
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前面没有致命错误，改的目的也是让整体上更好些而已。 The cracks, （which were） found in the gear steel of XXXX produced by xxx route, were analyzed by metallurgical microscope and SEM/EDS, and the results show that thexxxxx were the main causeS (对应于前面的复数were) of cracking. The cracks have been controlled effectively and the product quality has been improved by optimizing continuous casting process parameters. |
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