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It has been shown that constitutive autophagy in spinal cord and skeletal muscle tissue is influenced by whether the mice is male or female. Moreover, Campesi et al.4 suggested that in the heart, autophagy-related markers beclin-1 (BECN1) and microtubule-associated protein light chain 3B (LC3B) were higher in male rats than in female rats. Consistent with the previous study, Weis et al. showed that autophagy in the brain of neonates following hypoxia-ischemia displays displays significant sex differences. Furthermore, Sex differences in  autophagy was further confirmed in vitro assays.
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psyuan: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2016-04-10 14:27:56
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It has been shown that constitutive autophagy in spinal cord and skeletal muscle tissue is influenced by whether the mice 【is要改为are】 male or female. Moreover, Campesi et al.4 suggested that in the heart, autophagy-related markers beclin-1 (BECN1) and microtubule-associated protein light chain 3B (LC3B) were higher in male rats than in female rats. Consistent with the previous study, Weis et al. showed that autophagy in the brain of neonates following hypoxia-ischemia displays 【displays多出一词】 significant sex differences. Furthermore, Sex differences in  autophagy 【was改为were】 further confirmed in 【需要补上一个in】vitro assays.
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