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The materials characterization results demonstrate that the obtained sample containing large amount of oxygen vacancies and Ti3+ in the bulk phase.
…the low theoretical specific capacity may retards its wide practical applications
to remove the residual fluxed
A JEM-2100 transmission electron microscope (TEM) was performed… to observe the microstructure…
X-ray diffraction (XRD) patterns were measured…
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wolfmanhd: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2016-03-24 13:50:53
The materials characterization results demonstrate that the obtained sample containing 【contains】 large amount of oxygen vacancies and Ti3+ in the bulk phase.
…the low theoretical specific capacity may retards 【retard】 its wide practical applications
to remove the residual fluxed 【flux or fluxes】
A JEM-2100 transmission electron microscope (TEM) was performed【used】… to observe the microstructure…
X-ray diffraction (XRD) patterns were measured 【这一句但从语法上看不出问题,也许用measured不是最准确?可否用recorded,determined等?】…

注:【】内的词用于取代前面的词
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