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原句：At present, there are few researches on calculation method of
润色：Up to date, there are few researches available on calculation methods for
润色后加available好吗？

摘要：Three typical processes are summarized according to the method of treatment of
method是否该改为  methods  ？因为不同方法产生不同的过程

摘要：In this paper, hydromechanical equations to describe the effect of flooding are established and a calculation method for the longitudinal strength is introduced with reference to the ***** theory
可以用are is？而不是were was？  介绍自己的论文做了哪些工作，不应该是过去式吗？
找了一个范文，迷茫了  怎么一会are/is 一会were/was？
In this research a shipbuilding production process design methodology, using computer simulation, is

suggested. It is expected from suggested methodology to give better and more efficient tool for

complex shipbuilding production processes design procedure. Within the first part of this research

existing practice for production process design in shipbuilding was discussed, its shortcomings and

problem were emphasized. In continuing, discrete event simulation modelling method, as basis of

suggested methodology, is investigated and described regarding its special characteristics, advantages

and reasons for application, especially in shipbuilding production process. Furthermore, simulation

modeling basics were described as well as suggested methodology for production process procedure.

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都是意料之中的事，无需不淡定。
专业公司重在公司，具体内容公司也做不了。

原句：At present, there are few researches on calculation method of
润色：Up to date, there are few researches available on calculation methods for

看看这个“润色”改了什么？如果说你的有问题，修改后改善在哪里？加不加available对句子有任何影响吗？没有！At present 和Up to date对你的句子或者意思有多少区别？ none！
为什么要该？需要表明他们没有白那你的钱。

事实上，你的这个句子倒是真的有问题，只可惜，真正的问题他们并没有改，估计也改不了。
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