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[交流] IEEE trans on Power Delivery 一审意见,大修还是小修?接受的倾向怎么样?

Dear Authors:

Based on peer reviews, we have determined that your paper might be of interest for publication in the IEEE Transactions on Power Delivery after revisions that have properly addressed the concerns of the reviewers and editor.

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COMMENTS TO THE AUTHORS:

Editor-in-Chief's Comments:

Editor
Editor Comments for Author:
Give adequate answer to each one of questions raised by Reviewers.
The manuscript must be corrected by someone proficient in English grammar.

Reviewers' Comments:

Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
The article is written in an academic manner, it does not include a feasibility study and the evaluation of the developed method accuracy. The second optimization criterion (risk function (7)) is based on unreliable data therefore the absence of accuracy analysis makes all optimization results unreliable. Paragraph IV – Methodology and especially its parts C and D (pages 4-5) are written in too mathematical manner which looks heavy in a technical paper.

Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author
1. This manuscript proposed multi-objective optimization model to solve the problem that is innovative, but it is worth discussing that whether each parameter is easy to obtain.
2. There are too many abbreviations created by authors own in this manuscript

Reviewer: 3

Comments to the Author
The authors present an optimization approach for DC deicing of transmission lines. The approach appears interesting, but some issues exist and require changes:

1. English is poor in places or non descriptive. The entire paper should be heavily revised for language.

A. "The de-icing scheme 1 is shown in Fig. 4. It endeavors to avoid over design problem for determining the value of ice thickness."
AA. "the over design problem"?
AAA. What exactly is the "over design" problem? This term is never mentioned before in the paper...

B. IV.E needs appropriate indention...

C. "For the area of Southern China which often encounters ice disasters and has DC de-icing devices well equiped, the proposed de-icing outage optimal scheduling management framework is an effective tool to help the anti-ice work."
CC. This is 2015, there is NO excuse for misspellings of common words, "equiped" since modern word processors and even web browsers automatically highlight these, and frequently automatically change them.
CCC. "DC de-icing devices well equipped" means what? well versus non-well equipped? equipped vs not equipped? or what?

2. The flowchart in figure 2 is an excellent addition. However it is not that useful in its current state since components of the flowchart are not consistently named with sections of the text. The authors should link this back to the section of the text where each component is introduced. Hence the block for "Predict ice thickness of all icing lines" should be "Predict ice thickness of all icing lines (III.A)" and so on for all blocks.

3. The authors state "Fig.1 illustrates the proposed framework for de-icing
scheduling management." but then Figure 2 shows a flowchart for transmission lines de-icing outage scheduling (TLDOS) system.
A. This reviewer assumes that Figure 2 is contained in a block in Figure 1, this should be noted. The TLDOS flowchart should be indicated in Figure 1.
B. Block 2 of TLDOS "Predict ice thickness of all icing lines" and Block 2-4 (e.g. "Transmission lines icing forecast" of Figure 1 appear redundant. Shouldn't this icing information therefore be an input to the flowchart in Figure 2?
C. The authors should link this back to the section of the text where each component is introduced.

4. Some aspects of the conclusions are not as valid as they could be. The authors state "The ITPV is 10.9mm, which is far away from 15mm and little larger than that in scheme 2." However, this solution is an estimate and thus a confidence interval would exist for it.
A. All of these ITPV results are very close (the EENS results are similarly close too) and thus without confidence intervals, it is hard to tell how much "better" any one solution is...
B. The authors' statement "Compared with 1696.6MW·h without de-icing, each de-icing scheme is able to reduce the system risk." is obviously valid, however the EENS results differ by, at most 72.9 MWh and frequently by less than 10 MWh. So a confidence interval on this estimate would be helpful.

怎么看是大修还是小修啊,修改后 录用的机会怎么样啊,心虚如狗啊
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3楼: Originally posted by 吼一刺儿 at 2016-01-10 16:31:38
你觉得第一个人的意见和态度是里面最犀利的吗?
...

第一个不是写作问题。是审稿人看不懂你的数学公式,然后拿“可不可以实际运用“来压你。确实他说的也有道理,因为IEEE smart grid确实是偏运用的。我觉得剩下的几个问题像你说的都不是很难回答,因为你的数学基础在那。

还有我觉得编辑一般把最重要的审稿意见放在第一位的(至少我每次收到审稿意见是这样的)。所以我觉得第一个问题一定要回答好。当然,剩下也不能马虎。
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大修。第一个审稿人的问题一定要好好回答。要不接受不了。
补一下实验数据对比吧
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2楼: Originally posted by goddiao at 2016-01-10 14:19:09
大修。第一个审稿人的问题一定要好好回答。要不接受不了。
补一下实验数据对比吧

你觉得第一个人的意见和态度是里面最犀利的吗?

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大修。楼主真得好好下功夫修改了。不过只要编辑给修改的机会,证明你的文章就有接收的倾向,否则编辑直接拒了。好好改,加油!
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4楼: Originally posted by dong1059 at 2016-01-10 14:59:48
大修。楼主真得好好下功夫修改了。不过只要编辑给修改的机会,证明你的文章就有接收的倾向,否则编辑直接拒了。好好改,加油!

不知道你是否逐条看了修改意见。我自己看了,真正在技术上提出的问题只有两条,剩下的那么多意见都是写作上的,英语吧图表之类的。第一个人的意见不太容易改,说得有点笼统不够具体,我自己的感觉就是一大堆修改写作的,让修改的技术上的略少,拿不准到底什么态度了,心很虚

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5楼: Originally posted by 吼一刺儿 at 2016-01-10 15:45:10
不知道你是否逐条看了修改意见。我自己看了,真正在技术上提出的问题只有两条,剩下的那么多意见都是写作上的,英语吧图表之类的。第一个人的意见不太容易改,说得有点笼统不够具体,我自己的感觉就是一大堆修改写 ...

我明白你的意思。但恰恰是写作上的问题,最难回答。学术问题,你查查文献、补补实验,一般还知道怎么回答;但是写作上的,很难改,就像第一个审稿人似的问题。你要费点功夫了。
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6楼: Originally posted by dong1059 at 2016-01-10 15:55:16
我明白你的意思。但恰恰是写作上的问题,最难回答。学术问题,你查查文献、补补实验,一般还知道怎么回答;但是写作上的,很难改,就像第一个审稿人似的问题。你要费点功夫了。...

懂了,谢谢你的回答

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