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kongkeke: 金币+6, it is so great you share your views here, and thank u for be here 2015-12-29 18:41:06
Hi there,
It was great to express your feeling to your parents. I wish to say "Please take care of yourself and let me love you longer".

By the way, may I point out a couple small errors in your post. Firstly, when you start with "What would you want to say", you cannot add "something" anymore. Suggest you to remove "something". Secondly, it is customary to use "to" after "say", not "for". I'd suggest the sentence should read "What would you want to say to your parents"

In addition, people get what you want to say by "Speak iner thinking", but a better way is to say something like "Speak from bottom of your heart"

My apology if you do not agree - just wish to exchange views. Have a great time
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i love you forever! i want i can live with you forever!
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take care of yourselves,health is the most important
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00waterh: 金币+2, the words really teach me, thank you 2016-03-27 07:29:09
I am proud of you, and I want you are proud of me in the future.

I will do better of my work because I hope that one day I can invite all of you come to the city, the city I am living now.

In additon, I wish you can take care of yourselves.
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