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fly_liang

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    Therefore the findings lead us to believe that when selling the conspicuous products( such as luxury products) to the individuals (for example,Chinese), given that they are always perceiving in low power state (Farh et al., 2007), a company selling conspicuous goods should take into account the social exclusion(e.g.,membership rejected) for their products to maintain and attract customers. In addition, our findings indicate that highlighting the self-efficacy brought about by the products through advertising to them could yield high profits. Further research might also explore the relative power states and different powers(experienced and desired) in the context of the current research.

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In general, social exclusion (e.g. membership rejected) should be considered in sale strategy to maintain and attract customers with low power state for a company selling conspicuous goods. In addition, our findings indicate that highlighting the efficacy of the products in the advertisements could yield high profits. Further research would continue to explore the relative power states and different powers (experienced and desired).
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fly_liang: 金币+30, 翻译EPI+1, 谢谢,非常满意 2016-01-25 15:44:40
Therefore, 【it can be seen from】 the findings that to sell conspicuous products( such as luxury products) to the individuals (for example,Chinese) 【who are supposedly】 always  perceiving in low power state (Farh et al., 2007), 【a company should take social exclusion(e.g.,membership rejected) into account】in order to maintain and attract customers. In addition, our findings indicate that 【highlighting and advertising the self-efficacy brought by conspicuous products could produce high profits for companies】. Further researches 【may focus on exploring】 relative power states and different powers(experienced and desired) 【on the basis of current researches】.
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