²é¿´: 1887  |  »Ø¸´: 11
¡¾ÐüÉͽð±Ò¡¿»Ø´ð±¾ÌûÎÊÌ⣬×÷Õßnemott½«ÔùËÍÄú 143 ¸ö½ð±Ò
µ±Ç°Ö»ÏÔʾÂú×ãÖ¸¶¨Ìõ¼þµÄ»ØÌû£¬µã»÷ÕâÀï²é¿´±¾»°ÌâµÄËùÓлØÌû

nemott

Ìú³æ (³õÈëÎÄ̳)

[ÇóÖú] Ï×ÉÏÎÒÈ«²¿½ð±Ò£¬ÇóÍÆ¼öº£ÍâÈóÉ«»ú¹¹£¬ÄÜ¿ªÈóɫ֤Ã÷£¬ÈÏ¿É¶È¸ßµÄ ÒÑÓÐ5È˲ÎÓë

Çë´ó¼ÒÍÆ¼ö¹úÍâÈóÉ«»ú¹¹£¬ÄÜ¿ªÈóɫ֤Ã÷£¬ÈϿɶȸߵģ»
ͶµÄÊÇÓ¢¹úµÄÆÚ¿¯£¬³ö°æÉÌÊÇSAGE
PS:1¡¢´ó¼Ò¾õµÃÎÒ·¢ÓʼþÈÃ±à¼­ÍÆ¼ö¸öÈóÉ«»ú¹¹ÊÇ·ñºÏÊÊ
2¡¢µÚ¶þ¸öÉó¸åÈ˵ġ°Great diagram¡±ÊÇÈÃÎÒ°Ñͼ»­´óµãµÄÒâ˼Âð£¿GreatÓÃÔÚÕâÀï¸Ð¾õÓÐµãÆæ¹Ö£¬Ã»ÄÜÀí½âÉó¸åÈ˵ÄÒâ˼£¬ÇëÓ¢ÓïºÃµÄ°ï°ïæ
´óÐÞÁËÒ»´Î£¬·µ»ØÀ´µÄµÚ¶þ´ÎÒâ¼û»¹ÊÇ´óÐÞ£¬ÏÂÃæ¸½Éϵڶþ´ÎµÄÒâ¼û¡£
Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
The technical content of the latest revision is very strong. Overall I believe the technical contributions merit publication. However, there are multiple instances where I believe grammar corrections and sentence revisions are needed prior to publication. I have uploaded a pdf document with multiple comments and highlights of text that need improvement.  I have put in proposed improvement recommendations in the comments. I have also included in the in text comments instances where additional clarification is requested for specific points. Please see these highlights and comments and take them into consideration for your next round of review. Once they are addressed I believe your paper is ready for acceptance for publication.
µÚÒ»¸öÉó¸åÈ˶ÔÎÒµÄרҵÁìÓò±È½Ï¶®£¬¶ÔÎÄÕÂÒ²±È½ÏÈÏͬ£¬°ïÎÒ¸ÄÁ˺ܶà¾ä×Ó£¬ºÜ¸ÐлËû
¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­
Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author
Overall: Technical work appears to be sound, but English writing is poor enough to cause confusing for the reader in several places, along with numerous grammar and usage errors.
¡­¡­
p13, Fig. 6: Great diagram!

p13, Fig. 7: Great diagram here, too!
¡­¡­
µÚ¶þ¸öÉó¸åÈ˵ÚÒ»´Î¾Í˵¹ýÎÒÓ¢Óï²»ºÃ£¨poor£©£¬Õâ´ÎÓÖÅúÁËÒ»´Î
¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­
Associate Editor(s)' Comments to Author:

Associate Editor:
Comments to the Author:
While the technical aspects of the paper are quite good the presentation is not. It would be a good idea for a native English speaker to proof read the paper.
±à¼­ÈÃÎÒÕÒ¸önativeУ¶Ô£¬ÎÒÏëÕû¸öÖ¤Ã÷¸ø±à¼­¸ö½»´ý£¬²»¸øµÚ¶þ¸öÉó¸åÈ˾ÜÎҵĻú»á
»Ø¸´´ËÂ¥

» ²ÂÄãϲ»¶

ÒÑÔÄ   »Ø¸´´ËÂ¥   ¹Ø×¢TA ¸øTA·¢ÏûÏ¢ ËÍTAºì»¨ TAµÄ»ØÌû

nemott

Ìú³æ (³õÈëÎÄ̳)

3Â¥2015-10-27 12:43:18
ÒÑÔÄ   »Ø¸´´ËÂ¥   ¹Ø×¢TA ¸øTA·¢ÏûÏ¢ ËÍTAºì»¨ TAµÄ»ØÌû
²é¿´È«²¿ 12 ¸ö»Ø´ð

nemott

Ìú³æ (³õÈëÎÄ̳)

ÎÒ×îÏëÒªµÄÊÇ·ÝȨÍþµÄÖ¤Ã÷£¬ÔÙÄܱ£Ö¤ÐÞ¸ÄÖÊÁ¿µÄ»°¾Í¸üºÃÁË
2Â¥2015-10-27 11:33:23
ÒÑÔÄ   »Ø¸´´ËÂ¥   ¹Ø×¢TA ¸øTA·¢ÏûÏ¢ ËÍTAºì»¨ TAµÄ»ØÌû

LT_FU

Ìú¸Ëľ³æ (ÖøÃûдÊÖ)

´ÓרҵÀ´¿´£¬ËäÈ»ÎÒ¿ÉÄܰïÄã¸Ä½ø¸Ä½ø£¬£¬µ«¿Éϧ²»ÊÇnative

·¢×ÔСľ³æAndroid¿Í»§¶Ë
4Â¥2015-10-27 12:56:56
ÒÑÔÄ   »Ø¸´´ËÂ¥   ¹Ø×¢TA ¸øTA·¢ÏûÏ¢ ËÍTAºì»¨ TAµÄ»ØÌû

nemott

Ìú³æ (³õÈëÎÄ̳)

µÚÒ»¸öÉó¸åÈ˶ÔÎҵĶ«Î÷ºÜÁ˽⣬Ôڴ˴ηµ»ØµÄÒâ¼ûÖаïÎÒ¸ÄÁ˺ܶàÓï·¨ºÍ³¤¾äÖØÐ´£¬¼òÖ±ÊÇÔÚÃâ·ÑÉî¶ÈÈóÉ«£¬¹À¼Æ¿ÉÄÜÊÇ¿´µ½Á˵ڶþ¸öÈËÅúÎÒÓ¢Óï²»ºÃ¡­¡­¶øÇÒ֮ǰÕÒ¹ý±¾Ð£µÄÊÕ·ÑÓ¢ÓïÀÏʦ¸Ä¹ý£¬ËùÒÔÏÖÔÚÏëÕÒ¸ö¹Ù·½µÄÖ¤Ã÷À´¶Ô±à¼­Óиö½»´ý£¬µ±È»ÐÞ¸ÄÖÊÁ¿ºÃ¾Í¸üºÃÁË £¬Çó¿¿Æ×ÍÆ¼ö°¡

·¢×ÔСľ³æIOS¿Í»§¶Ë
5Â¥2015-10-27 13:03:47
ÒÑÔÄ   »Ø¸´´ËÂ¥   ¹Ø×¢TA ¸øTA·¢ÏûÏ¢ ËÍTAºì»¨ TAµÄ»ØÌû
²»Ó¦Öú È·¶¨»ØÌûÓ¦Öú (×¢Ò⣺ӦÖú²Å¿ÉÄܱ»½±Àø£¬µ«²»ÔÊÐí¹àË®£¬±ØÐëÌîд15¸ö×Ö·ûÒÔÉÏ)
×î¾ßÈËÆøÈÈÌûÍÆ¼ö [²é¿´È«²¿] ×÷Õß »Ø/¿´ ×îºó·¢±í
[¿¼ÑÐ] 085410È˹¤ÖÇÄÜר˶317Çóµ÷¼Á£¨0854¶¼¿ÉÒÔ£© +3 xbxudjdn 2026-03-18 3/150 2026-03-18 22:14 by zhq0425
[¿¼ÑÐ] ÄÜÔ´²ÄÁÏ»¯Ñ§¿ÎÌâ×éÕÐÊÕ˶ʿÑо¿Éú8-10Ãû +4 ÍÑÓ±¶ø³ö 2026-03-16 10/500 2026-03-18 20:59 by ÍÑÓ±¶ø³ö
[¿¼ÑÐ] 267Ò»Ö¾Ô¸ÄϾ©¹¤Òµ´óѧ0817»¯¹¤Çóµ÷¼Á +8 SUICHILD 2026-03-12 8/400 2026-03-18 20:55 by winsuccess
[¿¼ÑÐ] 328Çóµ÷¼Á£¬Ó¢ÓïÁù¼¶551£¬ÓпÆÑо­Àú +3 ÉúÎ﹤³Ìµ÷¼Á 2026-03-16 10/500 2026-03-18 20:41 by Wangjingyue
[¿¼ÑÐ] 295Çóµ÷¼Á +3 Ò»Ö¾Ô¸¾©Çø211 2026-03-18 5/250 2026-03-18 17:03 by zhaoqian0518
[¿¼ÑÐ] 311Çóµ÷¼Á +11 ¶¬Ê®Èý 2026-03-15 12/600 2026-03-18 14:36 by ÐÇ¿ÕÐÇÔÂ
[¿¼ÑÐ] 0817 »¯Ñ§¹¤³Ì 299·ÖÇóµ÷¼Á ÓпÆÑо­Àú ÓжþÇøÎÄÕ +7 rare12345 2026-03-18 7/350 2026-03-18 14:31 by laoshidan
[¿¼ÑÐ] 0703»¯Ñ§µ÷¼Á £¬Áù¼¶Òѹý£¬ÓпÆÑо­Àú +10 êØÎõÙâ 2026-03-15 10/500 2026-03-18 14:19 by 007_lilei
[¿¼ÑÐ] ÉúÎïѧ071000 329·ÖÇóµ÷¼Á +3 ÎÒ°®ÉúÎïÉúÎﰮΠ2026-03-17 3/150 2026-03-18 10:12 by macy2011
[¿¼ÑÐ] 268Çóµ÷¼Á +8 Ò»¶¨ÓÐѧÉÏ- 2026-03-14 9/450 2026-03-17 17:47 by laoshidan
[¿¼ÑÐ] 085600²ÄÁÏÓ뻯¹¤Çóµ÷¼Á +5 Ð÷ÐÒÓë×Ó 2026-03-17 5/250 2026-03-17 16:40 by laoshidan
[ÂÛÎÄͶ¸å] ÓÐûÓдóÀз¢Ð¡ÂÛÎÄÄÜ´øÎÒ¸ö¶þ×÷ +3 ÔöÈñ©ÈË 2026-03-17 4/200 2026-03-17 09:26 by xs74101122
[¿¼ÑÐ] 333Çóµ÷¼Á +3 ÎÄ˼¿Í 2026-03-16 7/350 2026-03-16 18:21 by ÎÄ˼¿Í
[¿¼ÑÐ] 085600µ÷¼Á +5 ÑúÑú123sun 2026-03-12 6/300 2026-03-16 15:58 by ÑúÑú123sun
[¿¼ÑÐ] 285Çóµ÷¼Á +6 ytter 2026-03-12 6/300 2026-03-16 15:05 by njzyff
[¿¼ÑÐ] 0856Çóµ÷¼Á +3 ÁõÃÎ΢ 2026-03-15 3/150 2026-03-16 10:00 by houyaoxu
[¿¼ÑÐ] ÇóÀÏʦÊÕÁôµ÷¼Á +4 jiang½ª66 2026-03-14 5/250 2026-03-15 20:11 by Winj1e
[¿¼ÑÐ] ±¾¿ÆÄϾ©´óѧһ־Ը´¨´óҩѧ327 +3 ÂóÌï¸ûÕß 2026-03-14 3/150 2026-03-14 20:04 by ÍâÐÇÎÄÃ÷
[¿¼ÑÐ] 304Çóµ÷¼Á +6 Mochaaaa 2026-03-12 7/350 2026-03-13 22:18 by ÐÇ¿ÕÐÇÔÂ
[¿¼ÑÐ] 0703»¯Ñ§Çóµ÷¼Á +7 Â̶¹ÇÛ²ËÌÀ 2026-03-12 7/350 2026-03-13 17:25 by njzyff
ÐÅÏ¢Ìáʾ
ÇëÌî´¦ÀíÒâ¼û