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系统阻尼与阻尼比和厚度比成反比，从方程17,19可以看出，q代表涂层与界面之间的阻尼比，m代表涂层与界面的厚度比，因此，系统阻尼值应该与界面的阻尼值和界面的厚度成正比。 System damping was inversely proportional to the damping ratio and thickness ratio. It can be seen from eq. (17) and (19), the “q” denoted the damping ratio of coating to interface layer between the coating and substrate, The “m” denoted the thickness ratio of coating to interface. Therefore, the value of system damping should be proportional to the damping and thickness of the interface. |
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It can be seen from eq. (17) and (19), the “q” denoted the damping ratio of coating to interface layer between the coating and substrate, The “m” denoted the thickness ratio of coating to interface. 这句有明显的语法问题。应改为 As can be seen from eq. (17) and (19), “q” denoted the damping ratio of coating to interface layer between the coating and substrate and “m” denoted the thickness ratio of coating to interface. |
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wxqtjw: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1 2015-10-05 04:40:30
wxqtjw: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1 2015-10-05 04:40:30
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你在翻译时把一句完整的话给肢解了，所以没了逻辑、没了效果。当然，这也与你的中文表达有一些关系。我给你整理一下，看是否有道理： 系统阻尼与阻尼比和厚度比成反比(从内容上看这句话和后面两回事，因为结论相反？所以不作为这里研究对象)。 重点看后面，正确的说法是： 从方程17,19可以看出，【q代表涂层与界面之间的阻尼比，m代表涂层与界面的厚度比】，系统阻尼值应该与界面的阻尼值和界面的厚度成正比。 其中括号中的部分是插入语，是对方程的一些解释。 所以，正确的翻译应该是（不含第一句话）： It can be seen from eq. (17) and (19), where “q” denotes the damping ratio of coating to interface layer between the coating and substrate and “m” the thickness ratio of coating to interface, that the value of system damping should be proportional to the damping and thickness of the interface. 如果不含插入解释部分，干净的句子就是： It can be seen from eq. (17) and (19) that the value of system damping should be proportional to the damping and thickness of the interface. 另外，对于公式中的解释，是不用过去时的，否则就是不公式了。 |
3楼2015-10-05 03:01:20