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Manuscript ID TEMC-163-2015 entitled "Nonlinear Behavior Immunity modeling of LDO voltage Regulator under conducted EMI"
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Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
1. What is your immunity model, please explain it in detail.
2. How did you get the formula (8) ?
3. How did you get the simulation and measurement results as shown in Fig. 16? And what is the relationship between Fig.16 and your immunity model?
4. At the end of left column of page 5, the last sentence "The expression of B_element output can be obtained in (14)", where is equation (14)?

Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author
The topic is not new and it has been widely treated as cited in the references. However, the paper can be interesting to engineers dealing with immunity problems in non-linear electronic circuits. Unfortunately, the paper suffers from some weaknesses in the given explanations, as indicated hereunder.

Globally, section III part A should be deepened with more explanations on how transfer functions are calculated. Some figures lack of annotations.

-in fig. 8, a line is missing on the figure: the power transistor is not driven actually!

-p4, in the paragraph under formula (1) Ro and RL have been omitted in the text and in fig.7.

-The explanations of the open loop transfer function lack of accuracy ; the bode plot of fig.9 should be discussed more clearly, and the plotting should be anotated. Hemi should be defined by the ratio of quantities indicated in figure 7 or 8.

-the comparison between fig.9 and 10 is quite difficult, the first is supposed to be plotted in log scale but not the other. Moreover the scales of the axes are not indicated in both curves.

Actually, a full scheme of the prototype should be added in order the reader could understand easily where are the quantities involved in the discussions.

Last paragraph of left column in p.5: the family name of Etienne is SICARD, add it please, and cite an adequate reference related to B_element.

The way how the parameters (8) of the B_element have been adjusted is not convincing: adjusting parameters to match with experiments is always possible (by increasing the number of parameters ) but has not prediction value ! Can these parameters be extracted apart in a specifically dedicated test bench, using a benchmark protocole?

Why the simulation model of the inductor fig.14 c) shows multiple resonances and anti-resonances while the measured curve not?

Although the general tendency was respected, the comparative curves in fig.16 show significant differences in 200-300MHz range.
Beyond 500MHz, the prediction is under the real immunity curve, what is not satisfying. These behaviors should be discussed and analyzed in order to improve the prediction model of immunity. Please, indicate how to do.

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