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[求助] 我实在是词穷。帮忙修改一下我对审稿人的回复。谢谢园子里的各位老师!

Table 1
--Please reducethe number of columns: Remove the column “MD” andjust state in the Results that all had reduced muscular tone.Also, you can remove the FMH column because you describethe familial relationships in the Results. You can also remove the CKlevel, because that is described well in Results. Note also that columnheadings are confusing. The first column is C=case, but under Muscle Force, youlist C=Cervical. Do you mean neck flexion? Neck Extension?Something else? Also, what do you mean by G=girdle. Do you mean hip girdle? Isthis different than lower limb proximal strength? Please be more specific.
Response : Correction has been made in table 1 in the revised version. We have removed the column “MD”, “FMH” and “CK” .We have stated that “All patients were characterized by mild hypotonia during earlychildhood” in result section. (Page 8, paragraph 3, line 3). We have revised “case”and “cervical” to “patient” and “neckflexion” respectively. We have revised “girdle” to “back”.
还有一个回复,我也是不知道怎么回复,这样回答实在很傻啊。
--Page 9: Line 9 –do you mean anterior ratherthan previous? Also, some of the muscles you describe arenot hip girdle muscles; the rectus femoris muscle, for example,is a thigh muscle.
Response : Thank you for your points. We have corrected “anterior” to “previous”. We have deleted rectus femoris muscle.
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