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[交流] Beauty girl want to donate cornea before when she is died

The beauty girl is 24 years old, in Zhejiang Province, she has a sick that is nasopharyngeal cancer. She think that she will no long time in the world ,so she want to donate her cornea to hospital, which will help other people who has sick in eyes.

Not only a beauty girl, but also have a beauty heart!

The source: http://news.163.com/photoview/00 ... #p=AQUPH5S500AP0001

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丹丹03: 金币+2, Thanks for your replying 2015-06-08 21:43:24

Beauty is a noun, and beautiful is a adj. so use either beauty or beautiful girl, they are the same.
While sick is a adj., and sickness is a noun, so use sickness in your sentences instead of sick.
The second phase is totally unfluent, you must use a COMPLETE sentence called object clause after 'that', and obviously there's no verb in the clause you are using.