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[求助] 大神给看看这几句话翻译对不对，特别是冶金的牛人，只为金币的别进，敷衍了事的别进

1、在轧辊交叉情况下，这样翻译对吗： under roll crossing conditions

2、between 5m rolling mill screwdown device and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 对还是between screwdown device of 5m rolling mill and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 这后一个表述对

3、 According to space equilibrium of both  force and moment  on BUR对还是 According to  force and moment space equilibrium of BUR对还是 According to BUR space force and moment equilibrium 最后一个对？

4、It is also of guiding significance for rolling mill structure designing.对还是It is also of guiding significance for  structure designing of rolling mill.还是It is also of guiding significance for  designing of rolling mill structure.

5、Rolling force of heavy plate is huge其中轧制力巨大，用huge表示力很大对吗？

6、The problems of roll axial force occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.对还是Roll axial force problems occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.这种of+名词作定语什么时候用合适？

7、the model of axial shifting resistance of HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.对还是the axial shifting resistance  model of  HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.更对，请解释一下为什么更好

8、A kind of microscale static determinate roll structure was put forward.对吗，怎么改

9、It presented axial force could lead to dynamic deviation of screwdown load. 还是It presented axial force could lead to dynamic screwdown load deviation . 还是It presented axial force could lead to  screwdown load dynamic deviation .

10 based on the force and moment equilibrium of upper roll system对还是based on the equilibrium of force and moment on upper roll system后一句对

11、想表达上下支承辊轴向力方向不同可能导致上机架牌坊轧制载荷增大，而同一侧牌坊的下侧轧制载荷减小，下面的翻译对吗？怎么写好，Different directions of friction on upper and lower BURs may lead the increase of load on the upper stand, while decrease of load on the lower of the same stand.
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马池跃: 金币+5, ★有帮助, 谢谢，又是只有你回复，小木虫上冶金机械的大牛很少吗，还是大牛们觉得我这问题太弱智了？ 2015-05-24 20:22:12
1、在轧辊交叉情况下，这样翻译对吗： under roll crossing conditions建议不要“s” under roll crossing condition

2、between 5m rolling mill screwdown device and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 对还是between screwdown device of 5m rolling mill and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 这后一个表述对
前者更好


3、 According to space equilibrium of both  force and moment  on BUR对还是 According to  force and moment space equilibrium of BUR对还是 According to BUR space force and moment equilibrium 最后一个对？
moment equilibrium 力矩平衡，为整理  space force 空间力量，为整体。
如果您要表达的意思是“根据BUR的力矩平衡和空间力量”，那么就是：
According to the moment equilibrium and space force of the BUR

4、It is also of guiding significance for rolling mill structure designing.对还是It is also of guiding significance for  structure designing of rolling mill.还是It is also of guiding significance for  designing of rolling mill structure.
其实三个都可以，个人偏向第一个，其次第三个，再次第二个

5、Rolling force of heavy plate is huge其中轧制力巨大，用huge表示力很大对吗？
可以

6、The problems of roll axial force occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.对还是Roll axial force problems occurred in many rolling plants have been reported.这种of+名词作定语什么时候用合适？
第二个更好，用了of，后面就要用名次了，或者是动名词，第一句of 后面还是occurred，这个有语法错误。但是更重要的是，第一句中，of右面单独的说roll axial force 这并不是一个“问题”，个人觉得用“Roll axial force problems”这个排列顺序更好。

7、the model of axial shifting resistance of HC intermediate roll was established based on preliminary displacement principle.对还是the axial shifting resistance  model of  HC intermediate roll was established based
on preliminary displacement principle.更对，请解释一下为什么更好
第二个好，“resistance model”是个整体，最好不要分开。如果硬要把model of，的形式，最好是the model of axial shifting resistance force,挤一个force，让resistance force 凑成一个整体，更加完整。

8、A kind of microscale static determinate roll structure was put forward.对吗，怎么改
一般不要"a kind of ",因为“一种什么什么，是中文思维”
同时static determinate 改成 statically determinated 更好
A microscale statically determinated roll structure was put forward，或者是
we put forward a microscale statically determinated roll structure(这个其实更好，避免头重脚轻)

9、It presented axial force could lead to dynamic deviation of screwdown load. 还是It presented axial force could lead to dynamic screwdown load deviation . 还是It presented axial force could lead to  screwdown load
dynamic deviation .
第一个更好，但是前面要做些修改，It presented that the axial force could lead to the dynamic deviation of screwdown load.

10 based on the force and moment equilibrium of upper roll system对还是based on the equilibrium of force and moment on upper roll system后一句对第一个对。

11、想表达 上下支承辊 轴向力 方向不同 可能导致 上机架 牌坊 轧制载荷增大，而同一侧 牌坊的 下侧 轧制载荷减小，下面的翻译对吗？怎么写好，Different directions of friction on upper and lower BURs may lead the increase of load on the upper stand, while decrease of load on the lower of the same stand.

改成“Due to the different axial forces of upper and lower BURs, the rolling load on the upper stand may increase, while the rolling load on the lower stand of the same side may decrease.”
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2楼: Originally posted by 武汉一心一译 at 2015-05-24 17:08:56
1、在轧辊交叉情况下，这样翻译对吗： under roll crossing conditions建议不要“s” under roll crossing condition

2、between 5m rolling mill screwdown device and backup roll (BUR) bearing chock 对还是 ...

both upper and lower gaps in WS housing are small, and in DS housing are large, namely, the crossing directions of both upper and lower work rolls are the same.  大神这句话多吗？特别是and in DS.....和 the same对吗
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3楼: Originally posted by 马池跃 at 2015-05-24 20:31:03
both upper and lower gaps in WS housing are small, and in DS housing are large, namely, the crossing directions of both upper and lower work rolls are the same.  大神这句话多吗？特别是and in DS..... ...

gaps 一般后面会接“”between“限定，以说明这个gaps。
多和少是次要的，表达清楚了才是最主要的
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