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满谛

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[交流] Rain

Rain

Rain outside, quietly;
As to word floating.
Couldn’t umbrella ward off?
Oh! The bud laughed in its beard.

The naughty leaf kicked back the rain.
Grass was not yet fully open on waking up.
Window opened in vacant.
Wet crawl pass the wall, stretch to the bed.

A cute girl has a basket to pick up mushroom,
But only to find lost in rain.
She came across a rabbit.
Then under an old tree for shelter.

The old tree is always serious,
But at the moment, rain dance ballet in its hand.
The little red umbrella, seemed to shine biography friendly.
Like its too long lost granddaughter.

                                                     2015-03-16


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listen to the voice in flower.
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满谛

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2楼: Originally posted by Zoe小不点 at 2015-03-16 10:47:09
beautiful

5楼2015-03-17 09:35:19
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Is it composed by yourself, like a poem? It's beautiful!
3楼2015-03-17 09:20:24
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3楼: Originally posted by topersist at 2015-03-17 09:20:24
Is it composed by yourself, like a poem? It's beautiful!

yes, thank you.
listen to the voice in flower.
4楼2015-03-17 09:34:41
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本周

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rainy here now
本周小红帽36.5℃
6楼2015-03-21 16:05:59
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