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需要修改的英文部分: In order to carry out the technology of production process of A-enriched solid solution, it is necessary to determine the content of B accurately. C as oxidant, D as used to fix valence of B.  A method is used to determine B content by titration of Ferrous ammonium sulfate titration  and phosphoric acid is used to fixe valence of B. Meanwhile, Sample dissolution method and temperature control, the amount of D, the temperature control when adding C and C amount were optimization.

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为了制定富A固溶体正极材料的生产工艺,需要对其前驱体中B含量进行准确测定,以C为氧化剂,采用D固定B的价态,用硫酸亚铁铵标准滴定溶液测定B含量,并对测样过程中溶样方法及温度控制、D的加入量、加入C时的温度控制和C的加入量等条件进行了优化实验.
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qhd511: 金币+15, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2015-03-06 14:18:08
为了制定 富A固溶体 正极材料的 生产工艺,需要 对其 前驱体中 B含量 进行准确测定,以C 为氧化剂,采用D固定B的 价态,用 硫酸亚铁铵 标准滴定溶液 测定B含量,并对 测样过程中 溶样方法及温度控制、D的加入量、加入C时的温度控制 和C的加入量等 条件进行了 优化实验.

In order to formulate the production process of anode material of A-enriched solid solution, it is necessary to accurately determine the proportion of B. Using C as an oxidant, and using D to fix valence of B, The proportion of B can be measured by standard titration solution of ammonium ferrous sulfate, in addtion, an optimization experiment was conducted regarding the conditions of measurement process such as sample dissolution method,temperature control, input amount of D,the temperature control when adding C and the input amount of C.
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In order to determine the production process of A-riched solution cathode material, the B content in the precursor must be accurately measured via standard ammonium ferrous sulfate solution with C as the oxidant and D used to fix the valence of B. About the measurement conditions, such as how and at what temperature samples were dissolved, the amount of D, the amount of C and at what temperature C was added, optimization experiments were conducted.

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3楼: Originally posted by sjlgxd at 2015-03-06 14:08:07
In order to determine the production process of A-riched solution cathode material, the B content in the precursor must be accurately measured via standard ammonium ferrous sulfate solution with C as ...

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