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00waterh

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i guess that your girlfriend may not be happy if she see the poem which you wrote for ex-gf.

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11楼2015-03-01 23:31:20
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zoufuchen

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11楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2015-03-01 23:31:20
i guess that your girlfriend may not be happy if she see the poem which you wrote for ex-gf.

only if she knew I'm on this site, lol.
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12楼2015-03-02 10:10:04
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zoufuchen

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10楼: Originally posted by lgx1012lgx at 2015-03-01 21:45:44
Can't catch up with your pace

"The wise sees wisdom, the benevolent sees benevolence", baby steps
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13楼2015-03-02 10:33:05
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kangyu02

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It may be a good poem, though not fully understood. It should be shorten, since many sentences are too long. Just an opinion of my own.

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14楼2015-03-02 20:04:26
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小毛虫007

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feel painful .
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15楼2015-03-02 22:02:14
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zoufuchen

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15楼: Originally posted by 小毛虫007 at 2015-03-02 22:02:14
feel painful .

indefinite departure was a "bitter sweetness"
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16楼2015-03-03 23:03:54
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zoufuchen

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14楼: Originally posted by kangyu02 at 2015-03-02 20:04:26
It may be a good poem, though not fully understood. It should be shorten, since many sentences are too long. Just an opinion of my own.

I was aiming to write it into a sonnet, but failed, lol
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17楼2015-03-03 23:05:48
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rogerlambert

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Too adorable for me to take- -    How I wish I was 10 years younger......
Regardless of that, well done my friend.
18楼2015-03-05 15:11:44
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18楼: Originally posted by rogerlambert at 2015-03-05 15:11:44
Too adorable for me to take- -    How I wish I was 10 years younger......
Regardless of that, well done my friend.

Cheers, my friend. Let's all keep a mind of youth while our phisical forms age

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风秉玉笙

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best wishes! such wonderful poem can not be down without intelligent mind and kind heart

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20楼2015-03-05 17:57:08
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