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满谛

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[交流] Outside

Outside

Outside, wind racing wild oats.
Outside snow waiting for moonlight.
Outside here comes your man.

There a fire breathing.
There a family dancing.
There a cherry on lane.

I stand by the window.
You stand in the yard.
We all hope go over the wall.

Lost in crowd, but you are so close.
Lost the aim, but I am with you.
Lost the way, together we find, again.

                                            2015-1-9

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plimsoll

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00waterh: 金币+1 2015-01-15 17:12:47
You are waiting your man at outside, you are dancing at yard, and you are meeting at crowd again!  perfect poem! wonderful! handclap!
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满谛

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2楼: Originally posted by plimsoll at 2015-01-10 18:44:57
You are waiting your man at outside, you are dancing at yard, and you are meeting at crowd again!  perfect poem! wonderful! handclap!

thank you
listen to the voice in flower.
3楼2015-01-10 21:08:32
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茜草775

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are u the girl in this photo? u are beautiful and nice! wish u will have a happy family!
4楼2015-01-10 21:23:40
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4楼: Originally posted by 茜草775 at 2015-01-10 21:23:40
are u the girl in this photo? u are beautiful and nice! wish u will have a happy family!

thank you
the picture I found on line
listen to the voice in flower.
5楼2015-01-10 22:27:48
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zq张强

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very well!i like。。
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6楼2015-01-27 10:25:36
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genhunter

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送红花一朵
I am not familiar with poems, but it sure sounds lovely.
离成功还差一点
7楼2015-02-22 02:31:58
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rogerlambert

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I don't know, cute for sure, but am I the only one got a sense of struggling?
8楼2015-03-05 15:45:42
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k966sc

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my bad didnt realized i clicked on a post category
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IamFionaHsu

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a song?

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