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满谛

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[交流] Wind

Wind

Walk with wind, no leaf left.
Are you cold or lonely?
Silent and gloomy, cloud float.

Branch like a dull ice, waiting for snow.
Nothing can melt.
Sparrow jumping, like a ghost.

Time ring, fireworks burst into bloom.
That moment, it light up the world.
Set sail a dream boat.

All the things gone with wind,
Then send us warm and new hope.
Wind make bud sprout.

                                     2014-12-26

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listen to the voice in flower.
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plimsoll

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the wind can use it generate electricity and also can use it to write a perfect poem. you can use wind describe your emotions, meanwhile had written a fantastic poem.
i believe that you will be a excellent poet. come on!
5楼2014-12-27 04:57:05
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00waterh

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A new hope, a new year.

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2楼2014-12-26 15:02:35
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英豪2010

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2楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2014-12-26 15:02:35
A new hope, a new year.

Over is beginning~ No final end~ every deadline is a new start~ a new day~ a new start~+_+

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00waterh

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3楼: Originally posted by 英豪2010 at 2014-12-26 16:55:05
Over is beginning~ No final end~ every deadline is a new start~ a new day~ a new start~+_+
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i am totally agree with you, buddy.
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