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mooncoco22

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第一次投稿,请各位看看应该怎么改,谢谢大家
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In general, the monitoring data of 10 years are valuable to the community to provide insights into the local wet deposition, and the manuscript is worth of publiction in the journal. However, authors need to address the following problems.
1. What are the implications of the long-term data to the local government policy? This should be emphasized in the manuscript.
2. There are a lot of English grammar problems need to be fixed by native speakers or professions.
3. The quality and organization of figures need to be improved.
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mooncoco22

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你要说出期刊名,中过该期刊的大神才能帮到你
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一条条修改啊,看上去问题不大了

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mooncoco22

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期刊是Atmospheric Environment
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mooncoco22

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1. What are the implications of the long-term data to the local government policy? This should be emphasized in the manuscript.
2. There are a lot of English grammar problems need to be fixed by native speakers or professions.
3. The quality and organization of figures need to be improved.
这三条2这个语法是不是需要请专业人士修改呢
第三条什么意思呢
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6楼: Originally posted by mooncoco22 at 2014-12-01 13:12:11
1. What are the implications of the long-term data to the local government policy? This should be emphasized in the manuscript.
2. There are a lot of English grammar problems need to be fixed by nat ...

2.如果周围有熟人帮忙
3.是指你的图片做的不好
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