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quite

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[交流] 【原创首发】missing you

  It's a nice day today. The sun, hanging up highly in the sky, has

brightened everything on the ground. However, I just stand in the shadow,

only missing you, silently.
   
     You’d ever promised me to sing songs to me when I was tied, to do

things you can to make me happy, to live a simple life with me when we

were old…But now, the person who can enjoy these will be another girl,

not me.
   
     I have told myself again and again that you have disappeared in my life

forever. What's more, you will never come into my life again. I have realized

that you will be a stranger in my future life, because we promised each

other to let everything fly by wind.
   
     I always believe you are a kind, gentle person. Please forgive me for

what I said when I was angry. Thanks for your companion in the past days.

Today, I can’t help missing you and thinking of our happy days, while I am

not willing to make you known.
   
     This is the first time I write down something for us and I think it is also

the last time. I wish everything goes well in your life. I also believe I will

have a better life in the future, quietly and happily.


[ Last edited by quite on 2008-5-9 at 14:10 ]
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I find a thing that I can read it "quite" easily.But I can't write something correctly.
Let me try,please.
You are quite rich in wisdom.
You can deal with the relationship of you and your exboy so well,I am quite willing to study from you.
But I always feel that there is something let me want to say something to you.
You are just  looked happily, but you are really very sad.
Everybody will just like you when lost his love, because human beings have so much emotion.
I haven't the ability to use English freely like you to express the words in my heart.
So, I really want to say the words in Chinese,but I stop it.
Please let me try again.
The love of a lady and a gentleman is a thing for the two, not for any only one of the two.
One person's love usually remains short,but the love of the two can countinue much longer,usually reach the length of a person's life.
Love of this kind is the normal true love.
It's so difficult to find the true love, so so many people give up at the moment when the love just begin for a very short time.
Love is very extensive, everyone wants to find the true love of oneself, but I just want to say that the true love is love,while love usually is not a true love.
Everybody have the free right to chase his true love, if he can open his heart, loves will come with wind, when a love comes into your heart, it quite likely becomes a true love.
That's the true love of youself.
I wish you can find your true love.
Let the past to be a past.
Don't let it becomes a big stone on the way your must go forward.

[ Last edited by tongnem on 2008-5-9 at 05:54 ]
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