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傻二黑01

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[交流] if it's sunny today

if it's sunny today
it's sunset now
with the yellow leaves floating
the wind touching my face
walking along the campus road
with nothing to wonder
just enjoy the quiet autumn
what a good things it is.

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michael_ye

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A poem? Very good.
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傻二黑01

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2楼: Originally posted by michael_ye at 2014-10-20 17:36:10
A poem? Very good.

Well, thanks for your attention and flower. In fact, it's maybe  just a  complex.
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qiaozheng

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also couple is perfect in the autum environment
端的是过往云烟,可寻,可期,不可怠
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傻二黑01

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4楼: Originally posted by qiaozheng at 2014-10-21 09:40:37
also couple is perfect in the autum environment

single but still enjoy.

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sometimes , weather can affect one's feeling during finite times. Do you ?
天高任鸟飞,海阔任鱼跃。
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傻二黑01

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6楼: Originally posted by 605214383 at 2014-10-21 12:30:46
sometimes , weather can affect one's feeling during finite times. Do you ?

I agree .
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00waterh: 金币+1, are rays even more than summer? 2014-11-06 14:04:36
I like sunny, but I don't like autum, because the sunshine of fall have the most ultravilet rays in all seasons.
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