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[求助] 润色一句汉译英的表述,谢谢。

对比图3(a)~(c)可见,M=5(对应温度最低情况),晶粒长大最慢,异常晶粒数量也最少(图3a); M=10(对应温度最高情况),晶粒长大最快,异
常晶粒数量也最多(图3a).

翻译:Compared with Fig.3(a)~(c), M=5 (corresponding to the lowest temperature), grain growth is the slowest and the number of abnormal grain is the lowest (Fig.3(a)), while M=10 (corresponding to the highest temperature), grain growth is the fastest and the number of abnormal grain is the largest (Fig.3(c)).
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 2014-10-06 15:01:15
小兰花: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢。 2014-10-06 15:16:57
Compared with Fig.3(a)~(c), grain growth is the slowest and the number of abnormal grain is the lowest when M is 5, which is corresponding to the lowest temperature (Fig.3(a)). In contrast, grain growth is the fastest and the number of abnormal grain is the largest when M is 10, which is corresponding to the highest temperature (Fig.3(c)).

注:Compared with Fig. 3(a)-(c), 不如简单的说成As shown in Fig. 3(a-c). 因为Compared with Fig. 3(a)-(c)这种说法在英语中不明确(你可以说compare Fig. 3a with 3b, 但你的说法不好)
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