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原文:In the present study, two groups of women ingested flaxseed or borage oil for 12 weeks. The control group received a placebo containing medium-chain fatty acids. Dose was 2.2 g total fatty acids/d with a-linolenic acid and linoleic acid as major constituents in the flaxseed oil group; in the borage oil group linoleic and g-linolenic acid were predominant. In the flaxseed oil group, the contribution of a-linolenic acid to total fatty acids in plasma was significantly increased on weeks 6 and 12, whereas there was an increase in g-linolenic acid in the borage oil group (P<0.05). Skin irritation was performed by nicotinate treatment, and changes in skin reddening and blood flow were monitored. Compared to week 0, skin reddening was diminished in both groups; blood flow was also lowered. Skin hydration was significantly increased after 12 weeks of treatment compared to week 0, with flaxseed or borage oil (P<0.05). Transepidermal water loss was decreased in both oil groups by about 10% after 6 weeks of supplementation. A further decrease was determined after 12 weeks in the flaxseed oil group. Surface evaluation of living skin revealed that roughness and scaling of the skin were significantly decreased with flaxseed and borage oil comparing week 0 and week 12 (P<0.05). Except for hydration, none of the parameters was affected in the placebo group. The present data provide evidence that skin properties can be modulated by an intervention with dietary lipids.
翻译:在该研究中,两组妇女分别服用亚麻籽油或琉璃苣油,连续服用12周。对照组服用含有中链脂肪酸的安慰剂。服用亚麻籽油组的服用剂量为2.2g的全脂肪酸(主要成分为α-亚麻酸和亚油酸)。琉璃苣油组中服用的琉璃苣油主要成分为亚油酸和γ-亚麻酸。在亚麻籽油组中,α-亚麻酸对血浆中全脂肪酸的贡献在第6周和第12周明显增加,而琉璃苣油组中γ-亚麻酸也有相应增加(P<0.05)。通过占替诺烟酸盐处理来进行皮肤刺激性试验,同时监测皮肤变红情况以及血流量变化情况。与未服用药物时相比,两组中的皮肤变红现象都消失了,血流量也相应降低了。无论是亚麻籽油还是琉璃苣油,在连续服用12周以后,皮肤的含水量与未服用时相比都明显增加。在连续服用6周以后,两组中受试者皮肤的水分流失都减少了约10%。12周以后亚麻籽油组中的水分流失进一步减少。活性皮肤表面评价表明,在第12周与未服用时相比,服用亚麻籽油或琉璃苣油后,皮肤的粗糙度和伸缩度都明显降低。而在安慰剂组中,除了皮肤含水量有变化,其他参数都未受到影响。以上实验数据为通过膳食脂质干预来调节皮肤属性提供了证据。
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真强必胜: 非应助 2014-08-29 14:37:08
翻译的很好、很专业。
没有明显曲解、误解之处。
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2楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2014-08-29 13:17:54
翻译的很好、很专业。
没有明显曲解、误解之处。

感觉还是比较生硬!
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zjlizijian: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2014-09-01 10:31:47
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3楼: Originally posted by zjlizijian at 2014-08-29 00:47:52
感觉还是比较生硬!...

重新认真看了下,对几处做了微调。供参考:
翻译:在【该:改为】研究中,两组妇女分别服用亚麻籽油或琉璃苣油,连续服用12周。对照组服用含有中链脂肪酸的安慰剂。服用亚麻籽油组的【服用】剂量为2.2g的【全改为:总】脂肪酸(主要成分为α-亚麻酸和亚油酸)。琉璃苣油组中服用的琉璃苣油主要成分为亚油酸和γ-亚麻酸。在亚麻籽油组中,α-亚麻酸对血浆中【全改为:总】脂肪酸的贡献在第6周和第12周明显增加,而琉璃苣油组中γ-亚麻酸也有相应增加(P<0.05)。【通过占替诺:去掉】【用】烟酸盐处理【来进行:去掉】【刺激】皮肤【刺激性试验:去掉】,同时监测皮肤变红【情况:去掉】以及血流量变化情况。与【未服用药物时:改为服用前】相比,两组中的皮肤变红现象都【消失:改为减弱】了,血流量也相应降低了。无论是亚麻籽油还是琉璃苣油,在连续服用12周以后,皮肤的含水量与【未服用时:改为服药前】相比都明显增加 【加上(P<0.05)】。在连续服用6周以后,两组【中:去掉】受试者【皮肤的水分流失:改为经皮肤水分流失】都减少了约10%。12周以后亚麻籽油组中的水分流失进一步减少。活性皮肤表面评价表明,在第12周与【未服用时:改为服药前】相比,服用亚麻籽油或琉璃苣油后,皮肤的粗糙度和伸缩度都明显降低【加上(P<0.05)】。而在安慰剂组中,除了皮肤含水量有变化,其他参数都未受到影响。【以上:改为本】实验数据为【加上:可以】通过膳食脂质干预【来:去掉】调节皮肤【属性:改为特性】提供了证据。
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