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tzkcarlos

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[求助] 自身免疫学翻译为中文-几段话,Autoimmunity Reviews 13 (2014) 108–113

PLA 2 R1 is a type 1 transmembrane receptor that is expressed by podocytes. Besides a short membrane-spanning intracellular domain, the receptor consists of a long extracellular domain with a cysteine-rich head, a fibronectin type II-like repeat domain and eight repeated carbohydrate-recognition domains [22].
PLA 2 R1 is one of four members of the mannose receptor family [23]. All of them have a conserved domain structure and share common characteristics such as constitutive endocytic recycling at the plasma membrane [24] which may provide a constant source of accessible PLA 2 R1 at the podocyte membrane for immune-complex formation [23]. Further more, the receptors exist in both an extended and a bent conformation conferring distinct ligand binding and oligomerization capacities [25]. Since the anti-PLA 2 R1 autoantibodies in patients with pMN only recognize a conformation-dependent target epitope [21], it is assumed that autoantibody-binding might only occur in one of these two configurations. Therefore, pMN might represent an autoimmune conformational disease (‘conformeropathy’), such as Goodpasture syndrome [1].
Although the exact mechanisms causing pMN are still under investigation, different studies show a strong relationship between antibody levels to podocytic proteins and disease activity. Since the discovery of anti-PLA 2 R1 autoantibodies by Beck et al. in 2009, there has been strong evidence that they are a key player in the pathogenesis [21]. For example, autoantibodies to PLA 2 R1 can not only be eluted from kidney tissue of pMN patients, but also colocalize with PLA 2 R1 in the glomeruli [21]. Therefore, it is widely accepted that upon binding of circulating autoantibodies to PLA 2 R1 on podocytes, subepithelial deposits are formed in situ, leading to complement activation and a cascade of events subsequent to the nephrotic syndrome (in most of the cases) [37]. Interestingly, autoantibodies to PLA 2 R1 have shown to be mainly of the IgG4 subclass, which is regarded as being unable to activate the complement pathway [38,39]. Nevertheless, since the terminal complement compo-
nent C5b-9 is detectable in glomeruli and urine of pMN patients [40,41], there is strong evidence for the involvement of the complement system. As most patients with MN have low or undetectable levels of C1q, the classical complement pathway can be excluded. Therefore, either the alternative or the lectin pathway seems to be predominantly involved [42]. This hypothesis is supported by the notion, that mannose binding lectin can be detected in glomeruli of MN patients [43].
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tzkcarlos

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真强必胜: 大家都体谅一下,应助者翻译了也不容易,楼主觉得不恰当可用自己推敲补充一下,实在不行找导师问问 2014-08-26 10:20:02
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2楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2014-08-25 22:24:21
本楼楼主要求删除
我觉得他花了不少时间和心思的,楼主却一再挑剔,有点过分哦。
英文这种东西毕竟不是咱中国人的,翻译过来难免变味,我们理工科的学生也不是学文学的,要达到“信、达、雅”也有点难哦。
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不是要求信雅达,但是有些句子不大通顺的情况下,我只是希望回答者再认真检查,看看其他有没有问题,顺便再修饰一下。如果要求很过分的话,自我检讨。至于说我一再挑剔,我想请问,回答者好像就回答了一次,我只是不断请求他再检查修饰,因为这个翻译很重要,但他觉得不用再修改。我也不是说不给他发金币,至于斑竹扣发30金币,再删除他的回答,相当于罚我30金币的做法,我不敢苟同。谢谢
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 2014-08-26 00:17:29
tzkcarlos(phu_grassman代发): 金币+30, he deserves it. Thanks for your cooperation. 2014-08-26 09:53:38
本楼楼主要求删除
我觉得他花了不少时间和心思的,楼主却一再挑剔,有点过分哦。
英文这种东西毕竟不是咱中国人的,翻译过来难免变味,我们理工科的学生也不是学文学的,要达到“信、达、雅”也有点难哦。
楼主为何不参照应助者提供的信息自己修饰一下呢?
2楼2014-08-25 22:24:21
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tzkcarlos

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有点机器的痕迹,不大通顺。课题组内刊要用的,求修饰更佳版本
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3楼: Originally posted by tzkcarlos at 2014-08-25 10:21:23
有点机器的痕迹,不大通顺。课题组内刊要用的,求修饰更佳版本

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