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改错这部分和下面的链接内容重了，看过的虫友可以直接看作文部分 http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=349142 改错 首先要说的是：CET6每次改错要你指出错误的地方肯定有错，绝对不会没错，而且肯定在这行，不会到前面或者下面去！！ 然后要说的是：从上次CET6改革来看，改错的判卷方法改变了。找出错误0。5分，改对错误0。5分 有错的一句话，最多10个英语单词，大家首先按词性来划分一次 名词错误的可能 （1）名词单复数 只有这1种可能，而且到现在的改错，我就记得就1次单复数没考，其他场次必考！ 形容词错误的可能 （1）意思颠倒，要改成反义词 这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有形容词，先上下文看看，有没有意思反了 （2）词性错误 个形容词在一起，那肯定有一个是修饰另外一个的，所以要改成副词 介词错误的可能性 （1）固定短语的搭配问题，不如key to,answer to, be faced with等 这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有介词，先看左右，有没有搭配错误 连词错误的可能性 （1）承上启下的错误 有时候，表示递进的，但题目中给出even if，所以要把if去掉；有时表原因的，但题目中是therefore，所以要改成because。。这样的错误也时常出现，但不是每次出现 （2）非限制性宾语从句只能由which引导，题目中很会用that来误倒 代词错误的可能性8 （1）固定短语的搭配问题，不如key to,answer to, be faced with等 这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有介词，先看左右，有没有搭配错误 连词错误的可能性 （1）承上启下的错误 有时候，表示递进的，但题目中给出even if，所以要把if去掉；有时表原因的，但题目中是therefore，所以要改成because。。这样的错误也时常出现，但不是每次出现 （2）非限制性宾语从句只能由which引导，题目中很会用that来误倒 代词错误的可能性 （1）代词与先行词不一致 前面说了是单数，后面用了them，所以要改成it。 这类的错误也经常发生 动词错误的可能性 （大头！！） （1）时态错误 明明文章在说过去的事情，但用了个is，所以要改成was 这个错错每次改错题目都有，所以看到错的句子有动词，先看上下，有没有时态问题 （2）主谓不一致 they was doing …… 这样的错误，找不出么，6级也别考了 （3）非谓语动词提前形式的错误 viewed……，they were doing…… 像这样的情况，viewed就要改成viewing 如果后面是it,前面是ing形式，也要注意的 （4）平行结构错误 前面连着2句都是to做什么，to做什么and do什么， 这时候就要在这个do前加to, 如果是to doing，就要改成to do 以上这些错误在考试中占6-7分左右，大家可以一定要抓住，后面的分数就难拿了 另类错误1）易混淆的词: 比如：His persistence was awarded when the car finally started. 中间的awarded是错误的，应该改成rewarded （2）从上下文来看，应该改动的词 一般发生在名词的身上！！ 比如前面说美国人吃饭的习惯，后面写了chinese，那就要改成American （3）固定词组用错一个，造成意思完全改变 比如：It also takes rise to a blurring of the dis tinction between science and technology 要把takes 改成 gives 这样的难点错误，解决方法是，能改则改，不能改确定哪个词错，骗2个0。5分 总的评注：做改错题一定要具有一双“慧眼”。重要的不是自己会运用一个语法点或知识点，而是能够识别出错误的用法，以审查的眼光去面对每一个改错题。这就需要掌握必要的答题步骤和技巧。 答题步骤： 1一般来说，做题时千万不要拿起来就改。先花一、两分钟从头到尾通读全文，对文章大 致内容有所了解，做到心中有数。 2然后把重点放在有错误项的标题号行，寻找较容易辩认的语法错误，如主谓不一致、 时态、语态使用错误、非谓语动词错误等等。 3如果错行中不存在上述明显错误，则应查看是否有词语搭配错误，易混词错误、词性错误等等细节错误。 4如果错行中既不存在语法错误，也不存在词汇错误，则从整体上查看上下文意思是否连贯，连接词是否使用正确，是否有逻辑混乱的现象，如否定句误用成肯定句造成句意不通等。注意：有时没有错项的行对改错很有帮助。 5找到错误项之后，按要求形式进行改正、删去或增添，并设法找到一个正确项使句子在 语法、语义和逻辑上都成立 作文推荐骨架 先要强调一下，CET6考图表作文的几率大，CET4考记叙文的概率大。这个主流要先说明的。我不押题，但我押框架。以下所有的框架供大家参考，考虑到大部分朋友都时间有限，所以我尽量把框架的字写多点。怕撞车的朋友，可以在各篇文章中挑几句重新排列组合。 图表式带数字比较的作文（1） As is described in the bar chart,(图表的总述).Figures indicate that(趋势1），and（趋势2）。 There are at least three good reasons for(图表总述的另一个种表达）。 In the first place,it is generally assumed that(理由一）。Secondly,with the open and reform policy being carried out,(某个短语）has a great influence on（原因）。Last but not least,today an increasing number of people are realizing that(某个原因的重要性 ）。Maybe there are some other reasons to show（图表述第三种表达），but it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable. From this point of view,it goes without saying that(措施）。We are looking forward to a much better and brighter future. 评注：这个框架是送给那些对作文信心不大的朋友们。我框架的内容已经有90几个字了，只需要大家填补40-50个字就够了。) 图表式作文带数字比较，并希望提出建议的作文 （2） As is depicted in the cartoon,(图表的总述）。For one thing，（趋势一）。For another,(趋势2）。It is interesting to note that(趋势三）。 My suggestions to tackle the problem are as follows.First of all,with the rapid development of science and technology,an increasing number of people come to realize that(意见一），this is because（原因）。Secondly,(意见二）。 Therefore,we should attach great significance to solving the problem. As far as I'm concerned,it is high time that (某个组织或人）must make intensive efforts to（采取什么行动）。Although we still have a long way to go,I am sure that tomorrow will be much better and brighter. 评注：上一篇是着重强调原因，这篇是原因和改善的措施并进的。还是考虑到大家时间紧迫，所以这篇的框架词也有90以上。 大家很强烈要求的议论文写法（3）(我采用新式写法，和旧的不同） It is generally believed that (事件）is a hot topic which is widely talked about at home and abroad.Some people think that(想法一）。Others argue that(想法二） Still others assert that（想法三） As a popular saying goes"Everything has two sides".There is no denying that（什么 had contributions to什么）。But it is partial to stress only one side.we should debate the matter pro and con.Though（什么好的事情已经发生），they are responsible for a lot of(不好的事情）。From what I have mentioned above we can see clearly that(结论）。 In short,we should keep in mind that(全文的结论）。We are looking forwarding to a promising future. 评注：这篇文章的框架CET46都可以拿过去改头换面。一般这样的文章，大多数人都会第一段写2意见，然后说自己的意见。第2段说3个理由。我就是为了打破这个瓶颈，所以在第一段列了3个理由，然后第2段从正反两方面论证。力求新意。这篇文章我拼了很多东西，也是我老喜欢的议论文的写法 图表带数字的描述（举2篇比较经典文章的开头） Since China opened its door to the outside world in 1979, Beijing has made remarkable results in attracting foreign business to invest in joint ventures. According to the pie chart, the investors in different enterprises come from 26 countries and regions. The investment of Hong Kong ranks first, accounting for 44 per cent of the total. Japan's investment makes up 19.2 per cent, putting it in second spot. Third is the United States at 16 per cent. 评注：这篇文章是说北京地区吸引外商投资的，是一块饼图，然后首段要大家描述。 我简单分析一下，第一句只要把北京换成our country，然后是百搭。第2句的开头是常用土图表作文的框架，后面部分看看，考试碰不到同样的文章。后面的三句描写手法是我要着重推荐的。第三句用了accounting for，第四句用了make up，第5句用了at。这3个词都有“占多少百分比”的意思。如果考到这类的作文能用上这3个字，再加上漂亮的首句。老师的第一印象很定来。从第二段开始，按照前面的表格，大家慢慢套 As is shown by the graph, the rate of car accidents in the city varied from month to month in 2002. During the period from Jan. to Mar., the number of accidents grew sharply, reaching 32 in March. Then the rate began to decline, and there were only 26 accidents in June. However, there was a rapid increase during the summer months, the peak being 39 accidents in August. Fortunately, the rate was gradually falling in the last four months of the year. It is interesting to note that there happened to be as many accidents in Oct. as those in Apr. Generally speaking, the trend involved a downward direction." 评注：这篇文章是说一年12个月，每月的车祸数量。我要推荐的除了表示“占百分比”的表达外，还要介绍如果描写趋势的。如果是上升，那可以用grew sharply,on the ris,be a rapid increase.如果是下降,可以用begin to decline,be gradually falling.如果考试是用曲线表示趋势的话，那能用上这5个次中的任意3个，文章就有色彩了。 成功和失败的关系 As you know, whatever we do, there are always two possible results: success and failure. We should try hard to strive for success and at the same time do our best to avoid failure. We should rely on our own efforts to win the victory. We have no reason to look to any accidental gain. We should always keep in mind that industry is the mother of success and perseverance holds the key to it. 评注：这段是描述成功和失败的关系。第二句中strive for和do our best to，一个用短语，一个用强调语气，可以借鉴。We have no reason to look to也是一个好句子，我们没有理由去期待什么， We should always keep in mind that industry is the mother of success and perseverance holds the key to it。这句是百搭，前面是个短语开头句，可以借鉴，后面一句是成语，一句是讲道理。记不住可以就记一句旅游业的发展 Tourism, a "smokeless industry", is developing rapidly in China. With the open and reform policy being carried out, thousands upon thousands of foreign visitors are crowding into our country. They are eager to see this old mysterious land with a splendid culture of more than 5000 years. Tourism brings China a lot of benefits. First it enables the Chinese people to know more about the outside world and promotes friendship and mutual understanding. Second, it is financially beneficial to China, which needs more foreign currencies for its modernization program. 这篇文章的第一端，CET4可以借鉴。。不管什么在中国的发展，都可以看成是无烟的工业，然后就是改革开放的套话。第2段主要是针对给中国带来的好处。如果考试中有外国到中国来消费的，不管是什么原因来消费，好处都可以是这2个科技类文章的写法（我采用正反结合的方法） Science and technology have brought about tremendous changes in people’s life. Scientific researches continue to open up previously undreamed of possibilities. Fifty years ago, few people could even imagine things like computers, space—shuttles. Now all these newly emerging technologies are benefiting people all over the world. In a word, advancing science and technology have made man master of the globe.As is known to all, everything has two coins. When we are enjoying the Mremarkable wonders which science and technology have brought us, we are suffering at the same time from a lot of troubles, such as environmental pollution, noise, green—house effect and the danger of nuclear wars. Let’s take cars for examples. They not only pollute the air in the city, but also make our roads overcrowded. Moreover, they are responsible for a lot of traffic accidents, which bring grave consequences both to the country and to victim’s families. As a result, we should not underestimate the other side brought by the progress of science and technology. 这篇文章的第一段我是建议大家看熟的。因为不管是什么文章，在生活中给我们带来好处的原因，我归纳就三条：改革开放；科技进步；文明提高。如果说改革开放，前面的文章对次强调了，这里不说了。这里让大家看看科技进步提高生活如何说。从第2段到第3段，是让害怕写科技类文章的朋友借鉴的，我从正反论述，再加个举例。如果已经熟悉用框架的朋友，那完全可以按照框架 （3）去写 关于具体措施的，多数情况下可以套的文章（以保护森林为例） My suggestions to deal with problem are as follows. In the first place,we should appeal to the government to set up a foundation to reward thost do much to protect resources. Secondly, those who cut down trees in a forest at must be punished by the law. Finally,it is necessary to encourage city- residents to plant as many trees as possible in and around the city. We are looking forward to a much better and brighter future. 评注：这篇文章的解决办法的模式是我想推荐的。第一步，呼吁。第二步，惩罚。第三步，奖励。如果考到假冒伪劣产品，也可以套吧，如果考到经济发展，那也可以饶到企业的诚信和the public的监督。反正只要和“保护”有关的，都可以用这个模式 祝愿所有即将参加六级考试的人都能取得好成绩！！！ [ Last edited by littleshark2008 on 2008-4-14 at 20:58 ] |
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