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[求助] 有个句子琢磨了半天不知道该怎么表达

各位大侠,最近在写文章,有个句子不知道该怎么写请高手给点指导,小弟先谢谢了!
想表达:这说明在实际情况下O2的存在对于氧化反应十分重要。这里 实际情况下这个意思总是表达不好,下面写了一个,不知道有没有错误:
This indicated that the presence of O2 is very important during the oxidiation reaction process in practice.
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dadalazi: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 十分感谢,送上金币 2014-08-14 08:56:33
修改你的句子:
This indicated that in the actual situation, the presence of O2 is very important during the oxidation reaction process. (NOT oxidiation)

我觉得这句子有许多重复和不必要的东西(也许你想强调这些过程),如果我写,则:
This indicated that in the actual situation, O2 is very important FOR oxidation reaction. (如果这个氧化反应是你特指的,则用the oxidation reaction)
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