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对这个句子,therefor前后的逗号不需要修改。句中“and”前为“vascular regulation ”,后为“atherosclerosis”,感觉有点不平衡、不一致,如果将“atherosclerosis”改为““atherosclerosis prevention”什么的(不懂专业,瞎猜),就好了。
11楼2008-04-07 23:51:02
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Endothelial nitric oxide synthase (eNOS)  synthesizes Nitric oxide (NO) which plays a key role in vascular regulation and atherosclerosis. Therefore, eNOS may be a candidate gene for ischemic stroke
12楼2008-04-08 19:09:23
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Nitric oxide (NO) synthesized by endothelial nitric oxide synthase (eNOS) plays a key role in vascular regulation and atherosclerosis; therefore, eNOS may be a candidate gene for ischemic stroke
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Endothelial nitric oxide synthase (eNOS) can be employed to prepare nitric oxide (NO), which plays a key role in vascular regulation and atherosclerosis. Therefore,eNOS is reasonably supposed to be a candidate gene for ischemic stroke.
13楼2008-04-09 20:41:58
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