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fireyp

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[交流] TO memory my passing youhth

Four   years   ago  today,I  came  to  this   city  with   lots  of   the   gratitude.But   today  some  people  left   here  for    good   future,always    i    felt   contradicton   ,kooking    much   left,I    wonder    where   is   my   future?  Sometimes    the     work   make  me   crazy,i   wantde  to   left   here    very   much.After    that     I analysis   what's   my    competitiveness?  NO   !On    work,I  am   a   designer,but    only   can   draw   some   paper    .to   other   place , I   can't     be   qualified.SO  i  need    to    study   somethings,then     go   other   place.Today    some   new   colleagues    arrived,see   them,i   felt    time   going   fly......
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Xiedanhui

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00waterh: 金币+2, good advice 2014-07-17 06:03:52
I'd like to say, your writing is hard to read~

Could you spend a little time in typing those words in a good style. Your attitude will influence your future subtly. I think you should do everything as perfect as you can!

By the way, "In memory of my passing youth" or "To the memory of my passing youth"
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2楼2014-07-16 22:19:27
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fireyp

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2楼: Originally posted by Xiedanhui at 2014-07-16 22:19:27
I'd like to say, your writing is hard to read~

Could you spend a little time in typing those words in a good style. Your attitude will influence your future subtly. I think you should do everythin ...

Thanks  for   pointing   out   my   mistake.My   english  is   very  poor.That's  the  reason why  I  come   here.I  will  do  my   best  to   improve  it.
4楼2014-07-17 22:25:07
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Xiedanhui

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4楼: Originally posted by fireyp at 2014-07-17 22:25:07
Thanks  for   pointing   out   my   mistake.My   english  is   very  poor.That's  the  reason why  I  come   here.I  will  do  my   best  to   improve  it....

Well. I am not concerned with your English, but your style. I think it is very easy to make an equal space between two words and between two sentences. I mean that your post has a bad typing, rather than bad English.

Besides, your English writing is just a bit odd, not poor. At least, you write out what you want to say.
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7楼2014-07-18 08:45:14
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Lopemann: 金币+1, that is fine 2014-08-08 21:55:46
it is hard to read. after reading, i have no interest to replay.

i am sorry
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3楼2014-07-17 09:46:42
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3楼: Originally posted by 475502411 at 2014-07-17 09:46:42
it is hard to read. after reading, i have no interest to replay.

i am sorry

I   am  very  sorry  that   my   english  is  so poor.i  will   do  my   best  to  improve  it.
5楼2014-07-17 22:26:44
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yhl2008

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at least you can use English to write something. If you consist write your mood everyday in English, I am sure your written English will be promoted a lot.
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6楼2014-07-18 04:20:37
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missqianyu

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about  up words  they  saying,i think so!
Sorry ,my   english is very poor.
8楼2014-08-07 16:44:07
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wdxs

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6楼: Originally posted by yhl2008 at 2014-07-18 04:20:37
at least you can use English to write something. If you consist write your mood everyday in English, I am sure your written English will be promoted a lot.

i totally agree
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8楼: Originally posted by missqianyu at 2014-08-07 16:44:07
about  up words  they  saying,i think so!
Sorry ,my   english is very poor.

it won't be a problem after practice, so keep learning, improvement needs time and process
10楼2014-08-08 14:54:29
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