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TO memory my passing youhth
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| Four years ago today,I came to this city with lots of the gratitude.But today some people left here for good future,always i felt contradicton ,kooking much left,I wonder where is my future? Sometimes the work make me crazy,i wantde to left here very much.After that I analysis what's my competitiveness? NO !On work,I am a designer,but only can draw some paper .to other place , I can't be qualified.SO i need to study somethings,then go other place.Today some new colleagues arrived,see them,i felt time going fly...... |
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00waterh: 金币+2, good advice 2014-07-17 06:03:52
00waterh: 金币+2, good advice 2014-07-17 06:03:52
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I'd like to say, your writing is hard to read~ Could you spend a little time in typing those words in a good style. Your attitude will influence your future subtly. I think you should do everything as perfect as you can! By the way, "In memory of my passing youth" or "To the memory of my passing youth" |

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Well. I am not concerned with your English, but your style. I think it is very easy to make an equal space between two words and between two sentences. I mean that your post has a bad typing, rather than bad English. Besides, your English writing is just a bit odd, not poor. At least, you write out what you want to say. |

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