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[交流] World Cup 2014 (Poem written by myself)

World Cup 2014 (Poem written by myself)

World Cup 2014

(Poem written by myself)
(Poem type: Sonnet, 14 lines.)

Thirty two countries rise flags in Brazil today
The fans in all world enjoy this game with utter glee
Samba girls are dancing under the green tree
The winners always jump and run away
Losers burst into tears with anger and dismay
I think all of them are crazy you might not agree
Because they forgot to eat dinner and drink tea
Matador's pride is lost in disarray
After four years Orange Warriors revenge intense
Three lions discuss that the luck was bad
Costa Rica 4 millions people overjoyed and reveal teeth
Every short story will make fans mad
Until the new champion emerges in common sense
Then they become national hero with sword in sheath

<The end>

For details about how to write Sonnet, please have a look at:
《Sonnet Tutorial》
Website:
http://forums.familyfriendpoems.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=1310


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陈艳玲

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very good!

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quiettimes

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Lopemann: English only here. 2014-06-22 22:20:40
哈哈,星哥大作,最后的图总是很给力
第一,锻炼身体;第二,不把工作带回家;第三,放手与舍得。
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ggwwmm1234

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好厉害,星老师。
7楼2014-06-23 19:18:03
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leaper0501

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2pac4ever

Reads like kind of funny though.
TIMEWILLTELL,JUSTHAVEALITTLEFAITH.
10楼2014-07-02 11:19:13
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