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caocuijiayou

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now I left the place where I lived for one year something is beautiful no no everything is perfect I remember people who helped me Since I was a Little girl I believe that the throunding is kindness I like smiling when I meet them so I really want to tell you my guys I remember u forever I really miss u so much

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00waterh: 金币+3, thank you for your kind proofread 2014-04-17 16:40:30
no punctuation:maybe not the best, but i think it will be better.
now, I have left the place where I lived for one year, something is beautiful, no no, everything is perfect . I remember people who helped me Since I was a Little girl.  I believe that the throunding is kindness,  I like smiling when I meet them, so I really want to tell you my guys, I remember u forever, I really miss u so much.
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More punctuation in paragraph or sentence,can help me to get what you are saying?
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00waterh

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people come, people leave.
dont think too much
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You got a sooooo long scentence and I cannot breathe. OMG help, help!
如果天堂里没有你,我宁愿活在地狱。
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