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八角寨

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[求助] 【汉译英】润色一句话,非常感谢。

为了解决该问题,本研究通过构建XX模型,研究AA、BB、CC、DD、EE、FF和GG等因素对HH的影响,建立能够预测II与JJ关系的动力学方程,探究KK的机理,为确定最佳LL参数提供科学指导。

翻译:To resolve the problem, by construction of XX model, this work will study the impacts of AA、BB、CC、DD、EE、FF、GG and other factors on HH. The kinetic equation of predicting the relation between  II and JJ will be built. It explore the mechanism of KK, and provide scientific guidance to determine the best parameters of LL.

【汉译英】最好能够简明扼要,符合科研英文表述,且表述专业。
非常感谢。

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RXMCDM: 金币+1 2014-03-02 16:07:16
RXMCDM: 多谢应助! 2014-03-02 16:07:30
(感谢奖赏)
Ground-breaking ____ algorithm-based XX model has been constructed to thoroughly investigate how HH may be affected by AA, BB,... and GG  Kinematic equations relating II and JJ will be derived and solved to determine optimum LL parameters in a KK mechanism.

一开始就 "Ground-breaking" 吸引评审注意
如果没有 ___ algorithm, 直接  "_形容词__ XX model" 即可

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八角寨: 金币+18, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢。 2014-03-02 21:23:30
更简洁:
除: " ____ algorithm-based"
改: "solved to determine"  -->  "solved for"

Ground-breaking XX model has been constructed to thoroughly investigate how HH may be affected by AA, BB,... and GG  Kinematic equations relating II and JJ will be derived and solved for optimum LL parameters in a KK mechanism.
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