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January 18,2014.I met You in some place ,your smile attracted me .The day after the day I met you,I see you again. All my memory is you,with your smile,in my head.
The second girl I'm not flattered to talk ,without any hesitation  to praise ,is you. Truly ,I'm on love with you .The first girl ,who I want to considerate for each other ,is you.Maybe you are not realize that how eagerly I want to be a friend with you .I , truly ,feeling you are present  the GOD sent to me. Anyway,all my head is you.I just can't Stop. August,my girl. Best Wish.

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尝试着改写了一下。楼主表介意~~嘿嘿
18th, Jan., 2014 I met you at the place and I was desperately attracted by your smile. On second day, I came across you once again. All I can think of is you, your smile, haunting in my head..
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You would probably not realize how eager i am to be friend to you. But I indeed consider it to be destiny to meet you in my life on that day. You are in my brain and I cannot stop thinking about you. August, my precious girl, you are my goddess. Best wishes to you.
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Chase her, don't hesitate.
While you're wondering, you are losing her. Don't be sorry for that the word didn't come out of you mouth the moment you met her. In your old days, you will live on memories, but don't let the memories kill you.

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so lovely

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in love with you...
i am afraid i can not get you. The words I know, the feeling I feel, but the English is .. somewhat awkward
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7楼: Originally posted by 紫廷 at 2014-01-22 09:07:18
尝试着改写了一下。楼主表介意~~嘿嘿
18th, Jan., 2014 I met you at the place and I was desperately attracted by your smile. On second day, I came across you once again. All I can think of is you, your ...

写的不错哦
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haha,i'm thinking of you

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