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[½»Á÷] go home or stay at school

if giving a chance to you to decide whether stay at home or go to school,what is your decision?with the vocation coming,some of you may face this dilemma.maybe,all of you choose go home.but if there is a world where  you can choice one of them,and if you choose it ,you must stay at home or school for at least one year!what is your choice?
          every coin have two sides,if you go home,you will  meet your family members(especially your parents ).your mother will prepare a lot of delicious food for you,and you can have enough time to sleep.how comfortable it is !but if you go home ,you will say goodbye to your roommate,you will have no chance to play with them for a long time.if you live in countryside,you may have no chance to surf the internet(for me).so,if you go home ,the only thing you can do is play your phone.
          what about stay at school?if so ,you will have a lot time play with your friends ,and you will have a lot of plans to do everyday.you can play computer games ,you can play basketball ,and you can do every thing you like!but the food in the dining room is terrible,and you will miss your home. the  only one you can depend on   is  yourself.
          if this occurred to me ,i will choose stay at home!dont ask me the reason,i wont tell you!what is your choice?
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jackking15

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3Â¥2014-01-15 17:30:12
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It's a good topic.

BTW, I used to see you there quite often but haven't seen you for a while.
Hope you can still drop in and post more here.
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2Â¥2014-01-15 17:27:53
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3Â¥: Originally posted by jackking15 at 2014-01-15 17:30:12
grammatically incorrect

Can you do some proofreading for him to make the article more coherent?
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4Â¥2014-01-15 17:44:22
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jackking15

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I am an amateur, but you are in charge here. I don`t buy it . It`s your business.

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