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为了更好的得到反映配合物1内磁耦合实际情况的主要参数,而又不使体系过于复杂化,在仔细分析该配合物晶体结构参数的基础上,并参考一些相关的磁与结构关系的文献报道,导出更加合理磁耦合模型。
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In order to obtain main parameters which can better reflect the actual situation of magnetic coupling in complex 1, without making the system too complicated, we carried out a very careful analysis of the crystal structure parameters and referred to some relevant magnetic and structural relationships reported in the literature [], exporting more reasonable magnetic coupling model.  
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2楼2014-01-11 11:06:05
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zyxr: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2014-01-11 21:17:24
Allow me make further polishing on the above translation.

... yet without over-complicating the system, we have carried out a very detailed analysis of....
... , thus deriving an improved magnetic-coupling model.

comment:很少会说a careful analysis, export没有derive准确。more reasonable model 有点诋毁别人的工作,我建议用improved会更容易让人接受。
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3楼: Originally posted by spiegboy at 2014-01-11 20:43:46
Allow me make further polishing on the above translation.

... yet without over-complicating the system, we have carried out a very detailed analysis of....
... , thus deriving an improved magneti ...

学习了,非常感谢!
4楼2014-01-11 21:17:18
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3楼: Originally posted by spiegboy at 2014-01-11 20:43:46
Allow me make further polishing on the above translation.

... yet without over-complicating the system, we have carried out a very detailed analysis of....
... , thus deriving an improved magneti ...

我追加了77 个金币,希望能得到你指导啊,下面这段比较长哈。
根据配合物1的晶体结构参数(图2左),Mn(1)-O(2)-Mn(2),Mn(3)-O(4)-Mn(2)和Mn(4)-O(8)-Mn(2)的键角很接近,可知Mn(1),Mn(3), Mn(4)与Mn(2)之间的磁耦合常数J应该很相近,假定它们相等是合理的(J1)。另外,Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(3)的键角是139.5o,与其它键角差别较大,因此Mn(1)-Mn(3)之间的磁耦合也是必须考虑的一种情况(J2)。Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(4)和Mn(3)-O(9)-Mn(4)的键角近似相等,并处于110o左右,根据文献的报道结果,该键角所处的范围导致Mn(III)-Mn(III)之间弱的铁磁耦合,并且Mn(1)-Mn(4)之间还通过叠氮EO桥联传递弱的铁磁耦合,Mn(3)-Mn(4)之间也还存在一个Mn(3)-O(6)-Mn(4)磁耦合路线,该键角为92.1o,也应该处在铁磁耦合范围内
According to the crystal structure parameters of complex 1 (right in fig 2), due to the bond angles of Mn(1)-O(2)-Mn(2),Mn(3)-O(4)-Mn(2) and Mn(4)-O(8)-Mn(2) are close to each other, we can infer that the magnetic coupling constants have a quite modest differences between Mn(1)and Mn(2), Mn(3) and Mn(2), Mn(4) and Mn(2), hence, we hypothesize the same J1 between them is reasonable. In addition, the bond angle of Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(3) is 139.5o obviously different with others, so the magnetic coupling between Mn(1) and Mn(3) is another situation should be considered (J2). The angles of Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(4) and Mn(3)-O(9)-Mn(4) are approximately equal about 110o, based on the results of literature reports, the range of the bond angles result in a weak ferromagnetic coupling between Mn(III)-Mn(III), moreover Mn(1)-Mn(4) though azide EO bridging transmit weak ferromagnetic coupling, Mn(3)-Mn(4) also exist a Mn(3)-O(6)-Mn(4) magnetic coupling passway and the angle is 92.1o which should be in the range of ferromagnetic coupling.
5楼2014-01-11 21:37:53
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我追加了77 个金币,希望大牛们来指导啊,下面这段比较长哈。
根据配合物1的晶体结构参数(图2左),Mn(1)-O(2)-Mn(2),Mn(3)-O(4)-Mn(2)和Mn(4)-O(8)-Mn(2)的键角很接近,可知Mn(1),Mn(3), Mn(4)与Mn(2)之间的磁耦合常数J应该很相近,假定它们相等是合理的(J1)。另外,Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(3)的键角是139.5o,与其它键角差别较大,因此Mn(1)-Mn(3)之间的磁耦合也是必须考虑的一种情况(J2)。Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(4)和Mn(3)-O(9)-Mn(4)的键角近似相等,并处于110o左右,根据文献的报道结果,该键角所处的范围导致Mn(III)-Mn(III)之间弱的铁磁耦合,并且Mn(1)-Mn(4)之间还通过叠氮EO桥联传递弱的铁磁耦合,Mn(3)-Mn(4)之间也还存在一个Mn(3)-O(6)-Mn(4)磁耦合路线,该键角为92.1o,也应该处在铁磁耦合范围内
According to the crystal structure parameters of complex 1 (right in fig 2), due to the bond angles of Mn(1)-O(2)-Mn(2),Mn(3)-O(4)-Mn(2) and Mn(4)-O(8)-Mn(2) are close to each other, we can infer that the magnetic coupling constants have a quite modest differences between Mn(1)and Mn(2), Mn(3) and Mn(2), Mn(4) and Mn(2), hence, we hypothesize the same J1 between them is reasonable. In addition, the bond angle of Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(3) is 139.5o obviously different with others, so the magnetic coupling between Mn(1) and Mn(3) is another situation should be considered (J2). The angles of Mn(1)-O(9)-Mn(4) and Mn(3)-O(9)-Mn(4) are approximately equal about 110o, based on the results of literature reports, the range of the bond angles result in a weak ferromagnetic coupling between Mn(III)-Mn(III), moreover Mn(1)-Mn(4) though azide EO bridging transmit weak ferromagnetic coupling, Mn(3)-Mn(4) also exist a Mn(3)-O(6)-Mn(4) magnetic coupling passway and the angle is 92.1o which should be in the range of ferromagnetic coupling.
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