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这样,每个sae2-配体的醇氧(图2左中的O(2)、O(4)、O(6)和O(8))都连接了两个Mn(III)离子;另外,独立的O2-(O(9))离子桥联三个Mn(III)离子;叠氮离子的N(5)桥联了Mn(1)和Mn(4)离子,这三种桥联形式共同连接,使配合物1形成了Mn4O4N的金刚烷结构。配合物1结构的显著特点是其不存在任何对称因素。
Furthermore, each alcohol oxygen (O(2), O(4), O(6) and O(8)) from sae2- ligand connect two Mn(III) ions, the independent O2-(O(9)) bridging three Mn(III) ions, N(5) from N3- bridging the Mn(1) and Mn(4) ions, the three bridge modes formed  an adamantane-like Mn4O4N complex which have a significantly characterize that it does not exist any symmetry factors.
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Thus,  two Mn (III) ions are connected to   each sae2- ligand  alcohol oxygen  (left in Fig 2 ,O (2), O (4), O (6) ,and O (8)) .Furthermore, three Mn (III) ions are  bridged by the  independent  O2-(O (9)) ions  . The  Mn (1) and Mn (4) ions are  bridged by azide ion N (5)  .    The co-connection  of the the three bridged links formed the  Mn4O4N adamantane structure of  complexe  1 .  The    distinctive feature  of    complexe 1 is that it has no   any symmetrical structure   element .
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So that, each alcohol oxygen of sae2-ligand(Left of Fig.2, O(2)、O(4)、O(6)andO(8))are connected with two Mn(III) ions, in addition, the independent O2-(O(9))ion is bridged with three Mn(III) ions, what’s more, Mn(1) and Mn(4) ions are bridged by azide ion N(5), the co-connection of such three bridged-link forged the complex 1 formed  a adamantane structure, the distinctive characteristic of this structure is that  it does not exist any symmetrical elements.
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2楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2014-01-10 20:56:45
Thus,  two Mn (III) ions are connected to   each sae2- ligand  alcohol oxygen  (left in Fig 2 ,O (2), O (4), O (6) ,and O (8)) .Furthermore, three Mn (III) ions are  bridged by the  independent  O2-( ...

Thus, two Mn(III) ions are connected to each alcohol oxygen (O(2), O(4), O(6) and O(8) left in Fig 2) from sae2- ligand, furthermore, three Mn(III) ions are bridged by the independent O2-(O(9)), the Mn(1) and Mn(4) ions are linked to N(5) from N3-. The co-connection of the three bridging modes formed the Mn4O4N adamantane structure of complex 1 with a distinctive feature that it has no any symmetrical structure element.
你看我这样修改好不好?
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2楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2014-01-10 20:56:45
Thus,  two Mn (III) ions are connected to   each sae2- ligand  alcohol oxygen  (left in Fig 2 ,O (2), O (4), O (6) ,and O (8)) .Furthermore, three Mn (III) ions are  bridged by the  independent  O2-( ...

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4楼: Originally posted by 然memory at 2014-01-11 09:36:47
Thus, two Mn(III) ions are connected to each alcohol oxygen (O(2), O(4), O(6) and O(8) left in Fig 2) from sae2- ligand, furthermore, three Mn(III) ions are bridged by the independent O2-(O(9)), the ...

关键是第一句逗号太多,一般以3个为宜,超过后就应该写。Furthermore作为分句标志自然些。如果后两句合在一块,则后面太长了。谓语为 formed ,一般要考虑句子平衡!浅见!
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