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pj198811

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[求助] 润色一句话

矿质元素P、K、Mn、Cu、Zn的含量及梨枣产量在秸秆对照中最低,秸秆覆盖下施肥显著提高了P、K、Mn、Cu、Zn、Fe的含量及梨枣产量。

我的翻译为: The ‘Linyilizao’ yield and contents of P、K、Mn、Cu and Zn were lowest in control of straw mulching treatment, which were improved in straw mulching treatment.

感觉不是很好,求大神修改。
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pj198811

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2楼: Originally posted by befair at 2013-12-04 19:56:57
All the mineral contents of P, K, Mn, Cu and Zn as well the yields of pears and dates were lowest when comparing with control straws. Straw mulching treatment significantly increases  the above-menti ...

呵呵,非常感谢回复,梨枣就是一种枣,很好吃的哦。
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befair

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【答案】应助回帖

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
zhtear99: 金币+1, 提出的建议很好。写出的话至少得让其他领域的人知道说的是什么,虽然不一定懂讲的东西。 2013-12-04 21:39:14
pj198811: 金币+20 2013-12-04 23:01:07
All the mineral contents of P, K, Mn, Cu and Zn as well the yields of pears and dates were lowest when comparing with control straws. Straw mulching treatment significantly increases  the above-mentioned mineral contents and the yields of pears and dates.
因为是外行,所以理解上很可能有误:
1. 梨枣是梨和枣吗?还是嫁接的什么新品种?
2. 中文并没有提Linyilizao,请楼主确认
供参考,不妥飘过
Befairorbeaware
2楼2013-12-04 19:56:57
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befair

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学习了,什么时候有幸可以品尝下。那么梨枣有标准的英文名称吗?请更换译句中的pears and dates
Befairorbeaware
4楼2013-12-05 09:09:34
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