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Hence, an eco-friendly and relatively inexpensive technology alternative for rapid removal of lead is soil washing which has been favored by researchers in recent years。帮忙看看这个句子顺不呀,谢谢。
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an eco-friendly and relatively inexpensive technology alternative for rapid removal of lead is soil washing
感觉上有点头重脚轻,用soil washing作主语会不会好一点呢
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
与2楼有同感,看看楼主是否可以考虑下面的重组:
Soil washing is an eco-friendly and relatively inexpensive technology alternative for rapid removal of lead and hence has been favored by researchers in recent years.
还有,个人感觉用preferred 比favoured好些,当然这本身也是个prefer/favour问题
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