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friendofyou

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zxhappy: 金币+2, 感谢虫友热心应助~~欢迎常来外语版交流学习~~ 2013-09-22 10:39:50
"my (这里应用大写My)best friend,li  zheng,has been living a happy life before (这里应改为since)I was in grade three senior high school, "这一句还应该修改,改成“had been living a happy life before I was in grade three senior high school"。
"Now he has successfully completed the college."这句也应该修改”He has successfully graduated from the college."
"From this thing,"修改成“From this story"

9楼大哥修改的很好,很全面,小弟就献丑了...
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11楼2013-09-22 09:18:48
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