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主编说有错误"In general, the encapulation of fluorescence substance by silica can be realized by the stöber process [20,21] or reverse microemulsion method [22,23]". 是不是把method改为methods呀。 主编说有错误"They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitive while were proved to be a pH sensor in basic solution". 我改为"They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitive when they were used to be a pH sensor in basic solution".不知可对 主编说有错误"These solutions were adjust to ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L". 我改为"These solutions were adjusted ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L".不知可对 主编说有错误"The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and the nanoparticles are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.". 我改为"The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and they are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.".不知可对 主编说有错误"The product was washing with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals". 真不知错在哪。 主编说有错误"The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles strongly affected by changing pH". 真不知错在哪。 有劳各位高人指点！谢谢！ |
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2楼2013-08-15 15:01:56
pcmagic
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jsliu880: 金币+3, 谢谢 2013-08-17 11:52:51
jsliu880: 金币+3, 谢谢 2013-08-17 11:52:51
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主编说有错误"They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitive while were proved to be a pH sensor in basic solution". They exhibit stability, high brightness and sensitivity when used as pH sensors in basic solution. 主编说有错误"These solutions were adjust to ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L". Ionic strength of these solutions was adjusted from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L. 主编说有错误"The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and the nanoparticles are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.". The silica shells offer a stability vehicle(stability vehicle啥意思呀) which endows the nanoparticles with the features of biocompatability, nontoxicity, water solubility, no pollution and easy separation by centrifugation. 主编说有错误"The product was washing with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals". The product was washED with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals.(乙醇和水的洗涤有先后吗，还是用乙醇水溶液？) 主编说有错误"The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles strongly affected by changing pH". The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles WAS strongly affected by pH values. |
3楼2013-08-15 15:55:49
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jsliu880: 金币+3, 谢谢 2013-08-17 11:53:04
jsliu880: 金币+3, 谢谢 2013-08-17 11:53:04
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1. In general, the encapulation of fluorescence molecules with silica can be realized with the Stöber process [20,21] or the reverse microemulsion method [22,23]. 荧光物质是Chinglish吧，我没在文献中见过这么表述的，此外一些介词的用法需注意。 2. They exhibit good stability, high brightness and sensitivity when used as a pH sensor in the basic solution". Sensitive是表示灵敏度吧，所以要用名词，其次时态需前后对应。 3. These solutions were adjust to ionic strength from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L. The ionic strength of the solutions was adjusted ranging from 0.1 mol/L to 0.5 mol/L. 4. The silica shells offer a stability vehicle, and the nanoparticles are also biocompatible, nontoxic, water soluble, no pollution and easy separated by centrifugation.". 不知道你前半句表达的意思。整个句子是不是就是要说明这种纳米二氧化硅包覆的荧光探针具有的优势？ 5. The product was washing with ethanol and water several times to remove the unreacted chemicals. washed，其次洗的方法的描述是相继呢（water后加successively）还是交替（water后加alternatively） 6. The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles strongly affected by changing pH. The fluorescence intensity of the B-doped silica nanoparticles was greatly affected by the changing pH.应该用被动语态。 |
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