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需要润色的是英文，不是中文，请应助前留意，谢谢！ The water quality of 13% of 980 state-controlled sections exceeded V class of ten water areas such as the Yangze River and the Yellow River in China in 2011. C is one of the main pollution indicators in those water bodies. Therefore, it is important to accurately monitor the C in water bodies. Aiming at the shortcoming of the traditional methods, instruments and equipment (sample digestion and determination), digestion reagents, and determination methods have been optimized and improved. On this basis, the detection techniques which are higher detection efficiency and accuracy, and environment friendly have also been developed and applied. The traditional detection method is suit for exterminating C with the content range of 3~900 mg/L in the light and moderate polluted water bodies. The improved and optimized methods extend the detect limits from 5 mg/L to 1200 mg/L, and they may shorten the detection time significantly, and reduce the costs, but cannot avoid the environmental pollution by the chemical reagents, and have insufficient oxidation ability to the refractory organics. B, D or a combination of several techniques, which have already been used as the mature detection methods in the fields such as drugs and immune analysis, mineral and rock analysis, have also been employed for the determination of C in water bodies. They provide lower detect limit (0.34 mg/L), further shorten the detection time, and dramatically reduce the pollution of the reagents. With the development of the science and technology, some new methods such as O, E, have been developed recently. They have wider detection range from 0 mg/L to 32100 mg/L, and are suit for the determination of C of different pollution levels in water bodies. The new techniques can give a reference for the accurate, rapid monitoring determination of C. 以下中文仅供参考： 2011年我国长江、黄河等十大流域的980个国控断面中有13%的断面为劣V类水质，C是其中主要污染指标之一。 因此对水体中C进行准确监测具有十分重要的意义。针对传统检测方法存在的缺点，研究者们对其所用仪器设备（样品消解及测定）、消解试剂、检测方法等进行优化与改进，在此基础上，检测效率及准确性更高、环境友好的检测技术也相继被开发与应用。传统检测方法可检测C含量为3~900 mg/L的轻度、中度污染水样；基于标准方法改进的检测方法将检出下限降低至5 mg/L，检出上限则扩展到1200 mg/L。该方法可显著缩短检测时间，降低检测成本，但不能避免试剂对环境的污染，对难降解有机物的氧化能力不足；B、D或多种技术结合的新的检测方法，将在药物及免疫分析、矿物岩石分析等其他领域或指标检测中成熟的技术或方法应用于C检测中，检出下限仅为0.34 mg/L，检测时间进一步缩短，试剂污染也大幅降低。随着科技的发展，O、E等不拘泥于传统检测方法的新方法，进一步拓宽了检测范围，适合C含量为0~32100 mg/L的各种不同污染水平的水样，为水中C的准确、快速监测提供参考。 |
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qhd511: 金币+50, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 感谢您的指点。 2013-07-27 20:19:32
qhd511: 金币+50, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 感谢您的指点。 2013-07-27 20:19:32
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