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p1801321

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However, the QC materials are still far from practical applications due to the narrow absorption bandwidth in RE ions, resulting from their intra-4f parity forbidden transitions, which inhibits materials from harvesting solar radiation.

their 指代的是RE ions
which指的是narrow absorption bandwidth
不知道这样写清楚了没有?

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p1801321: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助, thanks 2013-06-19 15:35:55
能不能这样?
However, the QC materials are still far from practical applications due to the narrow absorption bandwidth, resulting from RE ions' intra-4f parity forbidden transitions, which inhibits materials from harvesting solar radiation.
这样减少了their指代的问题,which又能连接bandwidth.
JUST FYI.
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p1801321: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 先给一部分,期待有更好的句子 2013-06-05 08:38:40
爱与雨下: 金币+1 2013-06-18 18:47:28
However, there is still a long way to go before QC materials can be applied. Since the transition of intra-4f parity is forbidden in RE ions, their absorption bandwidths are narrow, which inhibits materials from harvesting solar radiation.
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2013-06-18 18:47:36
p1801321: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助, thanks 2013-06-19 15:35:39
However, the QC material is still far from practical applications due to the narrow absorption bandwidth of RE ions resulting from the intra-4f parity fobidden transition, which could prevent the material from havesting solar radiation.
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我回答一下你的问题吧:

their指的是  the QC material
which 指的是前面 the QC material的状况。
2 楼的好像解释的有点不妥。
至少这部分:
Since the transition of intra-4f parity is forbidden in RE ions, their absorption bandwidths are narrow,
没能搞清楚their的指代关系。
理解了,一切都可以原谅;原谅了,一切都可以理解。有聆听的耳朵就会有原谅的心。
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