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[交流] a boring day

nothing special today,rain,cold and boring is the main moledy of today.i have sleeped in the bed all day.
i give one day to myself to realax and to forget something.so, the lazy side of me take over my life.
ehh,nothing special,but boring.

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15楼: Originally posted by 路下竹林 at 2013-05-17 10:17:54
thank you,would you mind to point out.so i can avoid it the next time...

Nothing special today, the main melody of today was rainy ,cold and boring. I have slept in bed all day.
I gave one day to myself to relax and forget something(unhappy). So, the lazy side of mine took over my life.
Eh, nothing special, but boring.

The main problem are the spelling mistakes ,tenses and capitalization matters. I have revised and highlighted the possible mistakes with red color.
Anyhow, you really did a good job! Hoping for your more great postings.