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lililong0

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作文题目:影响我最重要的一句话
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lililong0

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请斑竹帮我追加10个金币
2楼2007-09-28 13:02:33
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kaikaifeng

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学术纯属狗屁~

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lililong0(金币+2,VIP+0):你的作文写的太简单了,呵呵
水平不怎么样,好像还不如高中生写的,嘻嘻~~

            No pains,no gains
    From the moment I began to be a thoughtful boy,I remembered the sentence:no pains ,no gains.It taught me much,especially in my study,my work and life.
    It is universally acknowledged that children were proud of their great results,and I was one of them.I was good at mathematics,none of my classmates can catch of me.I was so proud that I did not read books any more and everyday I dreamed the daydream that I will be the most famouse mathematician all over the world.Beyond my expectations,I got only 53 in the examination,the worst one.
    I was so sad that I even planned to dropout!And later mother knew everything,she touched my head gently and said:"take seeds for example,seeds grow into trees,but without water,air,fertilize,can they be?No pains,no gains,you are the seed.."
    The next day,I began to study hard and then I got the best results.Later I worked in a company,I never forgot the sentence:no pains,no gains,it incentived me all the time.As the time went by,I also knew that:more pains,more gains;less pains,less gains.

[ Last edited by kaikaifeng on 2007-9-28 at 14:32 ]
不扯淡,不忽悠,不懂不要装懂;不折腾,不闹腾,睁眼不说瞎话;凭良心做人,以品德服人。
3楼2007-09-28 13:35:32
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minget

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才8个币币啊,太小气了吧!打个字都不止8个币币呀!
4楼2007-09-28 14:17:16
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immajia

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好象有点偏题了吧?人的题目是影响我最重要的一句话而不是这句话是什么
5楼2007-09-28 15:11:31
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immajia

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lililong0(金币+6,VIP+0):写的不错,很有水平呀
Let me have a try!
             One word influencing me most
    When a human being learned to speak,he first listened so much.The words he picked up can make someone to be a good man or a bad man. So, in our daily life,you may hear many words,whatever they are good or bad,they can influence you forever.
   At the begging of my school life, I am a naughty boy who only knew play games. As a result,my studying was bad,so I was regarded as a 'bad student' in many people's eyes. My parents made every measure they can take,but I what I did was disappoining.At last,they had given it up,and they even didn't pay any attention to me. I didn't understand them,but I wanted them to give me more attention. I had my ideas, I did everything that I thought right to let me know my exist. All I did made them disgust me more.
    The change occured when a kind,good-hearted teacher came.She never thought I was a 'bad student', she looked every student equally,and she gave me more attention. One day she had a talk with me. 'There was an old saying that said 'What you think you will be,then you be.'  Do you think you are a bad studen? ' She asked.  'Of course not.' I answered. 'OK,you study hard,and gain a good mark.That will prove it. Just do it,you will success. I believe that you can.'
     'What you think you will be,then you be.' The word changed my life,inflenced me for all my life. What I have achieved can't leave the word said by a good teacher. I appreciate it all over my life.
6楼2007-09-28 15:46:17
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immajia

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有日子没写过作文了,见笑了!
7楼2007-09-28 15:46:46
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lililong0

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hehe ,haikeyi
8楼2007-09-28 22:02:27
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