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柠檬树

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[求助] 编辑的两句话 不知道什么意思阿?

" In recent years, improving electron scattering at the interface to increase the resistivity change Δρ and reduce the film resistivity ρ is the
effective way to enhance MR properties," see the wrong writing of subjects and predicate in this sentence.
什么意思阿
"Firtt-time TAMR typewriting should be defined in the manuscript"

Firtt-time TAMR typewriting  这个是什么意思啊?
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柠檬树

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第一句话是让修改吗?
怎么修改合适啊?
2楼2013-04-19 09:32:27
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yangruyiyantai

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Firtt-time  or   first- time
每周心得汇报。源于牛津。值得借鉴。
3楼2013-04-19 10:21:33
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hookhans

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柠檬树: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2013-04-19 10:44:29
1) " In recent years, improving electron scattering at the interface to increase the resistivity change Δρ and reduce the film resistivity ρ is the effective way to enhance MR properties," see the wrong writing of subjects and predicate in this sentence.
这句话的主题和预测的的写作不对.
最好改为: The increase of the resistivity change Δρ and reduction of the film resistivity ρ by enhancing the electron scattering at the interface  is an effective method for improving the AMR properties

Firtt-time TAMR typewriting = first-time TAMR trypwritting
where-there-is-a-will-there-is-a-way.
4楼2013-04-19 10:36:53
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柠檬树

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4楼: Originally posted by hookhans at 2013-04-19 10:36:53
1) " In recent years, improving electron scattering at the interface to increase the resistivity change Δρ and reduce the film resistivity ρ is the effective way to enhance MR properties,&quo ...

嗯嗯 是的哦 查了下 果然 前面定义完 果然没有注明括号注明TAMR

后面又反复提到了

谢谢哈
5楼2013-04-19 10:44:19
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柠檬树

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4楼: Originally posted by hookhans at 2013-04-19 10:36:53
1) " In recent years, improving electron scattering at the interface to increase the resistivity change Δρ and reduce the film resistivity ρ is the effective way to enhance MR properties,&quo ...

貌似有点衔接不上,我这句话想表达的中文意思是:
想办法提高电阻率变化Δρ和降低薄膜的本底电阻率ρ是提高MR材料性能的有效办法。近几年来,通过改善界面处电子散射情况的研究引起了人们的极大兴趣[23-28]。

求帮助
6楼2013-04-19 10:50:03
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