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柠檬树

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[求助] 润色一句话,大家帮我润色润色,看看怎样合适啊

This process will repair the disorder and substantially accelerate the ordering process of the sample and reduce the sample vacancy density .

因为中间连用了三个and,感觉不是很合适,但是不知道怎么修改
大家帮我润色润色 怎么修改合适阿?
是用于投paper的,希望改后可以直接用到paper里
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yuranus

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This process will repair the disorder, substantially accelerate the ordering process of the sample and reduce the sample vacancy density .
2楼2013-03-05 17:48:08
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hookhans

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This process will repair the disorder, substantially accelerate the ordering process of the sample, and even reduce the sample vacancy density.
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This process will repair the disorder, then accelerate the ordering process of the sample and reduce the sample vacancy density substantially .
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柠檬树: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2013-03-14 19:49:54
The process will repair the disorder, which can substantially accelerate the the ordering process and reduce the vacancy density of the sample.
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