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the adhesiveness value of G yoghurt was 0.129N higher than that of F yoghurt (p<0.05). Whereas,  the gumminess had no significant differences between G and F yoghurts (p>0.05).
审稿人觉得这里用词不妥,比如whereas 求达人帮帮改下这个句子,谢谢
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your2007: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 3q 2013-01-15 16:35:47
Although the gumminess had no significant differences between G and F yoghurts (p>0.05), the adhesiveness value of G yoghurt was 0.129N which is higher than that of F yoghurt (p<0.05).

gumminess 和  adhesiveness  这两个词我觉得应该再想想。
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