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一.关于社会不良问题（serious problems）： In recent years, our society has witnessed the unparalleled development and progress in science and technology, which brings us a large amount of fortune and convenience, while it also carries something unwell. (..........) is the right one worth to be discussed. Bad influence the problem has sparked was obvious, so that we can almost casual of it from every corner of our life. Firstly......, secondly....., thirdly....... with the problem being so serious, it perhaps be the time that some policies be carried out by our government, and we everyone should strengthen our consciousness to (......some actions to against the problem......). In this way, it will be likely for us to taste the fruit and enjoy our life to the utmost. 二.关于新兴现象利与弊的讨论(advantage and disadvantage) In recent years, there is an increasing numbers of discussion about the phenomenon that (..........), a series of surveys and researches have been carried out by some responding institutions and associations showed that the tendency is becoming increasingly fierce. An invisible border was divided by different people who have different ideas, some people insist that (......) on the benefit of (.......). While the others against that (.....) at the result of (.......) From my perspective, just as a coin has its two sides, so does the phenomenon that (.......). it is imperative that essence should be absorbed and drawbacks should be neglected during the process. By this way, it is likely for us to taste the fruit and enjoy our life to the utmost. |
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有的地方应该改正一下。第二篇中“An invisible border was devided by different people with difference ideas"错了，改一下，改为“An invisible border was made obvious by different people with different ideas"。意为：因为不同的人有不同的意见，观点的划分变得明显。 原句型有：“An invisible border divides those arguing for computers in the classroom on the behalf of students' career prospects and those arguing for computers in the classroom for broader reasons of radical educational reform.” 不知道各位变换出好的句型来描述此段首句。 |
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