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M,a novel cathode material for lithium-ion rechargeable battery, was first synthesized by a solution route by using A and B as the raw materials. The as-synthesized samples were characterized by XRD and SEM techniques,the results show that the samples are submicron rod-like M grains. The electrochemical behaviors of the as-synthesized samples were studied by rate discharge technique. Experimental results indicate the compound used as cathode material of lithium-ion give high capacity and good cyclic reversibility. A specific capacity of 184.6mAh/g can be obtained in the range of 1.8~4.0V(current density :1/3C) in the first cycle and with stable capacity plateau about 110mAhg-1.

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by a solution route by using A and    第二个by换一个词吧  from????????
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M,a novel cathode material for lithium-ion rechargeable battery, was first synthesized by a solution method by using A and B as the raw materials. The as-synthesized samples were characterized by XRD and SEM techniques. It shows that the samples are submicron rod-like M grains by result. The electrochemical behaviors of the as-synthesized samples were studied by rate discharge technique. Experimental results indicate the compound used as cathode material of lithium-ion giving high capacity and good cyclic reversibility. It  can be obtained a specific capacity of 184.6mAh/g in the range of 1.8~4.0V(current density :1/3C) in the first cycle and with stable capacity plateau about 110mAhg-1.
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Originally posted by 可可西里 at 2007-7-16 11:10 AM:
by a solution route by using A and    第二个by换一个词吧  from????????

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M,a novel cathode material for lithium-ion rechargeable battery, was first synthesized by the solution route  in which both  A and B were used as  raw materials. With that the as-synthesized samples were characterized by XRD and SEM techniques,it was show  that the samples are submicron rod-like M grains. With that the electrochemical behaviors of the as-synthesized samples   were studied by rate discharge technique,  it was indicated  that the compound when that was used as cathode material of lithium-ion can give high capacity and good cyclic reversibility, which specific capacity of 184.6mAh/g can be obtained when which was in the range of 1.8~4.0V(current density :1/3C) in the first cycle , and with stable capacity plateau about 110mAhg-1.

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M,a novel cathode material for lithium-ion rechargeable battery, was first synthesized by a solution route using A and B as raw materials. The as-synthesized samples were characterized by XRD and SEM techniques,the results showed that the samples were submicron rod-like M grains. The electrochemical behaviors of the as-synthesized samples were studied by rate discharge technique. Experimental results suggested that the
lithium-ion rechargeable battery with this compound had high capacity and good cyclic reversibility. A specific capacity of 184.6mAh/g can be obtained in the range of 1.8~4.0V(current density :1/3C) in the first cycle and with stable capacity plateau about 110mAhg-1.
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试着用些逻辑词汇连接一下各个单句,一群单句看起来很散
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