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sping05

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[交流] 帮忙改正一句话,英文的(求助完毕,金币已付)

During the peast decade, Li-ion rechargeable batteries had become a commercial reality and now have ben produced and distribute all over the world.

就这句话,编辑让修改的
我自己看不出毛病
有求诸位了

[ Last edited by sping05 on 2007-7-13 at 16:25 ]
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mystar

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sping05(金币+1):thks
During the peast decade, Li-ion rechargeable batteries had become a commercial reality and now have ben produced and distribute all over the world.
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During the past decade, the rechargeable Li-ion battery has been a reality.  It is .....

[ Last edited by mystar on 2007-7-13 at 14:40 ]
不要使自己麻木于制度化当中,而抛弃了从前的美好事物和希望。
9楼2007-07-13 14:38:51
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budofchina

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sping05(金币+1):thks
应该是两个时态的问题吧
2楼2007-07-13 13:16:49
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枭狼

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sping05(金币+2):thks
During the peast decade, Li-ion rechargeable batteries have become commercial reality, which  have been produced and distributed all over the world now.
4楼2007-07-13 14:12:32
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raojiaxi2420

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sping05(金币+1):thks
During the past decade, Li-ion rechargeable batteries had become a commercial reality. And now they have been produced and distribute all over the world.

你得状语修饰的应该是过去的年代,而句子当中又包括了"NOW",我觉得应该是断开的。
6楼2007-07-13 14:27:28
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