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21楼2012-10-27 18:26:28
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句子太长容易产生误解。建议不要太长,有时尤其是自己不怎么能够说得清楚时还是简练一点好!
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22楼2012-10-27 19:21:44
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帮你改一句吧。The results show that the molecular flow transmission probabilities of regular polygon tubes increase slowly towards those of cylindrical tubes as the number of sides increased under the condition that the cross-sectional area and length L of the polygon tubes and cylindrical tubes are the same.
还是你自己重写吧。。。。
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23楼2012-11-02 17:30:46
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andersonlyw: 金币+50, 有帮助 2012-11-03 00:16:42
提个建议吧
Results show that the molecular flow transmission probabilities of regular polygon tubes increase slowly and approach those of cylindrical tubes with an increase in the number of sides when the cross-sectional areas and lengths L of regular polygon tubes and cylindrical tubes remain constant.
第二句不会改,感觉主要是括号的内容不合适,建议用简单句。
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